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The Lich King



MPORTANT NOTE: Being a FanFiction, the story is completely non-canon. What I WILL tell you however is that it takes place in the events right after HL2:E2 after the rocket launch.. Plus, being a crossover, some things may not make sense. Bear that in mind.
(Ex: In most other ‘Human in Equestria’ Fics, the human(s) are turned into ponies. In my opinion, this has been disproved by the HL series, because it literally shows humans going to other universes and still retaining their shape. SO yes, humans are once again in Equestria)
Also, throughout the FanFiction, I will give links to some appropriate music and information as you read.

Chapters (3)
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Comments ( 31 )

*sees word count*

Could it be...? A GOOD Half Life Fic?!
Ohhhhhhhh... I GOTTA SEE THIS!


....Was this on ED? Cause i think i read this, word for word earlier...


It was on here back when dirt was new. I think the author is trying to start it up again...

Looking good so far.
Keep it up.

Good, but you mistake defiantly and definitely (very often), make sure you know which is which!

Give Gordon lines. He shall be the new Ferb. :rainbowkiss:

“What’s with all the tattoos on their asses?”

That man is my hero. :rainbowlaugh:

306913 "Take all of my thumbs"
That somehow sounds...wrong.
And I thought this then looked at ur profile pic.

"She quickly pointed into the direction of the portal clod." - clod? As in clodhoppers?! :rainbowkiss:
"Alyx peaked her head through a hole" - :rainbowhuh:
"While looking around, she peaked through a window" - :twilightoops: Wrong word, buddy!
"Standing there was a steel blue stallion with a dark brown mane" - :pinkiegasp: A DOUBLE SPACE!
"I have never seen theme before" - :facehoof:
"After having she drank a couple of gulps of water from the bucket" - :rainbowderp:
"Its still holding together" - :twilightangry2:
"that pony could defiantly see strain marks" - :flutterrage: Y U NO?!
"please meet neck here at the podium" - :unsuresweetie:
"I defiantly know this is not a dragon situation!" - skype-emoticons.com/images/emoticon-00121-angry.gif
"location on the map, From what we could gather" - Wrong quotation mark :raritydespair:
"Its about a forty five minute journey" - :raritycry:
"out of the speakers, Power outage detected." - Another incorrect quotation mark! :fluttershyouch:
"Emergency Generators will start in" - Why have a capital letter here?
"making sure the machines were still functioning a few Vortigaunts talking to each other" - I can has comma?
"his gravelly voice, Freeman, we appear" - dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/eenope.png
"other’s conversation, When the missile" - ...
"Gordon’s shoulder, My boy, you know" - :fluttershbad:
"and defiantly nowhere to get more supplies" - RAGE!
"the grass was defiantly softer" - AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH
"One of the rebels asked, What will we do" - ...
"Getting his crowbar out and proceeded to mark X’s into the tree trunks, marking a trail behind them." - Uhm...
I'm not going to bother mentioning the other errors :pinkiesick:
FYI, it's "yeah", not "yea"

"She now defiantly knew that they did not mean harm" - e.deviantart.com/emoticons/moods/anger.gif
"It was also defiantly darker" - e.deviantart.com/emoticons/moods/anger/rage.gif
"You are defiantly not from around here" - e.deviantart.com/emoticons/moods/anger/rage/outraged.gif

"Isaac closely examined the now still books, We have designed something like this before," - Y U MISS QUOTATION MARK? e.deviantart.com/emoticons/moods/anger/rage/psychotic.gif
Okay, I'll stop bothering you now. There are some other errors though... e.deviantart.com/emoticons/moods/anger/frustrated.gif

317722 [Click this button] <-Here.Now stop complaining about errors.
About the defiantly error...
On the description.

"Author : Bongo"
"Posted by : Sethisto"
i dont think theres a problem with my repost here...

Looks good so far. How come the ponies havent questioned Gordon's scilence?

331691 Well duh. Thats why hes my icon.

331691 You should have them ask, and have him either:

A: Be cut off.
B: Actually say something in a manly voice.

It's all on you. :scootangel:

lol mane six meets dr.freeman :ajsmug::yay::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2::raritywink::twilightsmile:

350631 i agree on B. Gorden should say something and or have a few lines here an there. i hate he never talks. he's like big mac :eeyup:

411765 it's been 184 weeks, can we get an update plez?

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