My name is White, White Glove and I'm just a regular old thief. I have the basic skills of a thief, lockpicking, agility, and the ability of stealth without violence. Unless it's in self defense of course. I wandered and crawled through the streets of Canterlot like a rat, hidden, small, and unnoticed hoping to achieve and get what I want. One day I return to the castle of Canterlot to acquire some income for myself and others. But I become exposed, not by the guards, but by her.
Another One Shot I'd try after watching the start of Season 4
Cover art by OmegaSunBurst on deviant art.
Chapters (1)
This was amazingly written awesome work.ps good luck on your exams mine are this week.
i'd love to see this finished. good luck with your exams
I like the idea, but it is pretty heavy-handed. You're giving us way to much information and it is just feeling forced. Tempting as it is for a short story like this, you really shouldn't stop and tell us a bunch of details about the world (explaining all the bits of technology, rambling off about his home, etc.). The ideal is that this information will develop naturally. Let the characters give the info in what they sense and say, or don't give it at all. I understand wanting to tell all of the cool stuff you thought up, I really do, but you have to let the story progress naturally.
I had one of my exams today and I totally bombed it
You should continue this story. It's really good.
Twilight isn't immortal now, and she will not outlive her friends, but no matter how many times I remind myself, I still end up crying at that one part with the window and Fluttershys cutie mark ..... :(( no matter, I'll just think of something else.... ^.^ that was quick!
3778879 Thank you very much.
I kinda wish that this would've continued... But, I will be content with just this.
should probably drop the sex tag.
5574154 No it's there for sexual themes. Not actual sex. That's why its rated T.
This is amazing work you have done,would you mind making a sequal?
7345053 I would but I would rather focus on projects currently in the works. Maybe in the future.