Writing in Equestria is not always first nature --- maybe because hooves cannot easily hold a pencil, let alone write words coherently. This does not mean, however, that they do not create art, and dream poetry.
This is a written collection taken from the minds of ponies, revealing their deepest thoughts, their darkest desires, and all the things one cannot always reveal in prose alone.
To reiterate, your poems are awesome!
This was a nice little poem, pretty much matches the feelings Fluttershy has in the show. I liked it.
This is an overall review of this entire set of poems.
These poems each had a unique tone. Most of them sounded like something out of Shakespeare - they were dramatic and eloquent - Applejack's sounded as country as you'd expect with a hint of metaphor, and Fluttershy's almost sounded philosophical in a way...
In other words, you are a very talented poet.