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Final Draft

All the world is indeed a stage, and we are merely players, performers, and portrayers; each anothers audience outside the gilded cage.


Sweetie Belle discovers an ancient kingdom buried beneath the beach that has been cursed to only appear once every hundred years. Breaking the curse is a simple matter, under any normal circumstances.

This is based off a short story I read long ago, and I hope someone can tell me what it was called.

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Comments ( 12 )

“How can they break the curse?”
“You have to buy something.”

Sounds like a scam to me!

That was pretty good:pinkiehappy:

and that's why I always carry cash on me! but damn, that was a sad story:fluttershbad:

I wish I could help them :fluttercry:

Mares eye's...

Put the apostrophe in "Mares"

Otherwise it is well written. I cannot help you on the name of the story you based this off of.

I found this amazing.

Thank you very much:scootangel:

WELP, that made me slightly depressed.
It's amazing how many one shots could be full stories.
Good job on this.

Surreal but pretty good.

A little melodramatic, and the beginning meandered - as in perhaps all that on "Who's that alicorn? Duh duh duh" could've been cut, made way for more Sweetie introspection to build her up more - though I can understand where you were coming from. Interesting idea, and interesting twist.

her parent’s rented


Celestia also knows about the kingdom... she's the one who cursed them.

She doesn't tell anypony because she's Tyrantlestia and unforgiving and stuff. :trollestia:

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