My Little OPony: Twilight Is Magic

by cleverpun

Griffon the Twilight

"Oh, hi Twilight!" Rainbow waved a hoof at the griffon next to her. "Meet my friend from flight school! Her name is Gilda, and we used to be best buddies."

Gilda blushed sheepishly. "H-hi Princess. Nice to meet you. You uhm, you have really pretty wings." Gilda looked to the side, hoping her bangs would obscure her embarrassed face.

"Why thank you." Twilight smiled. "It's nice to meet you too. Any friend of Rainbow's is a friend of mine!"

"We were just going to have a picnic on a cloud," Rainbow explained. "Care to join us?"

"Oh, I wouldn't want to impose," Twilight said.

"Oh, no, you wouldn't be imposing!" Gilda exclaimed. "I wouldn't mind sharing Rainbow with someone as amazing as you."

"Oh, well, if you insist!" Twilight said happily.

The picnic was nice.

Author's Note:

I seriously don know why everyone was saying alicorn twilight would ruin the show. IMHO, they should have made her a alicorn way sooner. Hopefully in season 4 she'll get the attention she deserves and they'll stop wasting all the episodes on other ponies.

Comments

[Stiggerzz]

Best ending to a chapter ever.

[Masterweaver]

We all know that Discord is going to hijack the author's notes and deconstruct this story when he comes round.

[nullaccount]

Nothing's more perf than this.

[Lag Incarnate]

Yeah, most kinds of authority will really change how someone acts. Also, TWILIGHT OP NERF PL0X

[Diamond264]

I can't help but notice how short these chapters are. Princess Wincess Smoon Super Effective Shoop-Da-Whoop out the plot Sporkle Minceraft PWN Stop Hammertime Overpowered Overawesome Magic/Friendship/Soft Taco Twilight Sparkle is long chapter-deserving Twilight Sparkle.

[Diamond264]

Also, while I'm at it,

[FanOfMostEverything]

3525710
I sincerely hope so.

[cleverpun]

3526002 i shouldn't even need to write this much; Twilight sparkle being best should be self-evident
and you forgot 'pretty' and 'modest'

3525411 3525417 ikr? I died my hair purple so I could be more like her she's so smart and pretty we're a lot alike

3525710 Season 2 wasn't very good there wasn't enough twilight in it and the two-parters could've been better they made twilight way too weak it broke my immersion. This story will prolly only do season 1 even I cant fix everything.

3525498 youre right im sorry I really did make Celestia way too powerful. Maybe I should have made Twilight the ticket pony so she could give herself the tickets? But then who would've promoted her; Celestia? This is y writing is hard.

[SongCoyote]

Going through the initial silliness I honestly expected to tire of it quickly. Sustaining this kind of thing over any period of time without it becoming tedious is not easy.

Unsurprisingly, Twilight Sparkle exceeded my expectations and continued to be as seductively fascinating and delightfully interesting as she began, if not a bit more so. Clearly she is best pony and deserves all the internets, a mole of cookies that will never go stale, and as many hugs as she could ever desire. Plus more if she wanted it, from whatever pony suited her fancy.

I am so glad we have such a wonderful entity in our midst. Perhaps if I am fortunate enough I will see her someday myself.

Light and laughter,
SongCoyote

[cleverpun]

3526635 I know! I totally agree. twilight needs like one giant hug from everypony all at once anything else isn't good enough for her

OOC: I know how you feel about the tedious thing--after all the My British Pony and Letters From a Disgruntled Friendship Student and such, I'm pretty skeptical of the format myself. As my story gallery may show, however, I rarely refuse an opportunity to skewer cliches.

[cornholio4]

Let me guess when she meets diamond tiara and silver spoon they instantly apologise to the CMC and stops being bullies forever.

[Neko Majin C]

Gilda tamed in ten seconds flat by none other than the super ultra extreme awesomazing sexy awesome smart humble Princess Twilight Mother Bucking Sparkle. I love how the comments are longer than the actual chapters.

[The Snide Sniper]

On the one hand, it's parody. On the other, it lost its novelty after the second chapter, and it depends on its novelty.

[cleverpun]

3528751 It lost it's novelty when Letters From a Disgruntled Friendship Student did it but that's okay becuz im a really good writer so this shouldnt even count as parody twilight really is that gr8

See also this comment 3526880

3527743 thats a good idea i was gon ignore dt and ss because theyre mean but that might work

[DannyJ]

Oooooooooooh... It's a thin, thin line between intentionally bad and genuinely bad, and most people can't tell the difference half the time anyway. Tread carefully, bro. You're definitely on thin ice here.

[Sereg]

I really do love the author's notes.

[Diamond264]

3526363
Pretty is as self-evident as Twilight's greatness.
Although, I say that she's not modest. She's too great to be modest. Too great for her to not acknowledge it. If she didn't acknowledge it, she would be dubbed stupid or crazy.

[Qub3d]

>Author comment

3537011
nice avatar. /)

[Seraphimus]

"I wouldn't mind sharing Rainbow with someone as amazing as you."

Dirty mind, Gah

[Rubycast]

The picnic was nice.

Love it.

[Ray MorningLight]

The world is falling apart