Every time you read one of my stories, an orphan is allowed to be happy. Do it for the orphans.
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Lives up to its tags.
Sheer Brilliance.
I did enjoy that punchline at the ending, particularly.
Hi, remember me? This was great, I loved the ending, but I do want to point out a few highlights, and one question if you don't mind.
Thank you
Why did you say "the earth pony said"? The reader knows it's Pinkie Pie talking, which leads me to think of LUS; not sure if that's what you were going for. Maybe you were comparing Pinkie Pie to Rainbow Dash. I'm not sure.
I was about to say you should hide Twilight's love for Big Mac, but when I read this, it made sense. Good going
That is funny; having your ruler decide who's to blame by using a die.
Are you going somewhere with this?
So far, much more entertaining than a "mature" rated story usually turns out to be. I've put this on my read later list so I can keep track of it.
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Heya epreeses! Lemme address a few of your questions.
I tried putting Pinkie's name in there, but it sounded a bit repetitive, and I try to attribute dialogue more often than not. Probably I could've done better than "the earth pony", though.
Haha, yeah, I have to go somewhere with that plot point. It's kind of the basis for the entire story.
Glad you enjoyed it!
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That "mature" tag hurt so much, though...
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I aim to please.
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Aaaaaah yiss. Suck it, clopfics.
I had a similar idea brewing in my head for a while but I think yours seems like it might be a bit better, LOL poor clueless Pinkie Pie.
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Great minds, eh?
This does not seem like something that a Christian would accept.