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CutieMarkCrusaders


Sweetie Belle is the best pony, and I can think of ten reasons why.

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This story contains a ship that I accidentally made yesterday. I was playing a game with my pony figures and all of a sudden one of them told Rarity they loved her. Thought it would make a good story, so here goes!

One of Rarity's closest friends confesses to having a crush on her, and not wanting to hurt her friend, Rarity excepts. On the way home from the boutique, however, her new special somepony finds the perfect gift for Rarity, which may end in disaster for the both of them.

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Interesting story. Lyra is Rarity's best friend? WOW.
Would you mind adding some spaces between paragraphs?

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Sorry, but I don't like how it looks when I put spaces in between the paragraphs.

my story didn't pass moderation until added some spaces between paragraphs. how do you do it?

Hmmm... interesting. I'm not a very big shipper, but I'll bite. Very interested to see where you will go with this.
i just noticed you misspelled "Fluttershy" near the end. You put "Flittershy" and that's a ship in and of itself.
Finally, I'm going to agree with elmago02, some spaces would be nice.
In short- good work, very little errors I could see, and will be following!

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