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Some called it "The Dark Times", others "The Plague Years". Bureaucrats gave it their own cold title: "Equis War Z"
These are the stories of those who survived those dark times when the dead walked the earth.
A World War Z/ MLP crossover. Written due to the lack of crossovers for this amazing novel
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Grammar mistake!
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Seems pretty interesting so far. I'll keep an eye on this.
Quite a few errors, (those last few paragraphs are a disaster) but overall, I can say that I'm going to enjoy reading this. Good job.
I was
guards
cannibalism
I'm not you... but I'm assuming you meant for it to look like this?
All of these should not be bolded, as they are the point of view of the Doctor.
I'm not trying to criticize your work... just helping you make it better. Hell, I'll even be your editor if you want.
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Yeah, it's obviously
"These are the stories of those who survived those who survived those dark times when the earth walked the death."
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Oops
I will say the bolded stuff is an attempt to mimic World War Z's style so most of it was on purpose but on that last bit I screwed up
It was really late when I was writing that last bit
3563433 He fixed it. No need for sarcasm, friend.
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I wasn't being sarcastic.
3565692 What? Please elaborate.
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I said i totally wasn't being sarcastic.
3566224 It's hard to trust you with that Discord profile pic.
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I REALLY wasn't being sarcastic. REALLY.
Ah...screw it, i was being sarcastic, happy?
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And will the two of you stop
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C'mon, we're just doin' it in good fun, its not like we're fighting or anything.
3568209 Knew I'd suss you out.
3568270 It's all in good fun mate
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Yeah, fine fine, you did it, happy?
WANT A CAKE!?
3570442 Of course I wanna cake, are you stupid or something?
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Alright. *punches your face (with cake)*
3570526 At least there was cake.
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Want even more cake!? Alrighty.
Look behind you.
SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS---*Boom*
3570561 There was no cake... now you're gonna die.
Let's take this to PM so we don't spam Bluemoon1996 too much.
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You know, what we better end this. (Don't answer me.)
Here's some cake *hands cake*
Author, sorry for spamming you.
Farewell, my planet needs me! *flies up randomly*
Hi there, me again...
This was a great chapter, no matter how short...
Buuuut... a few errors I noticed.
First thing. I just wanted to remind you that each type of viewpoint or action has it's own type of font. You seem to have it down pretty well, but you seem to forget tha the book does the speech things like this:
Interviewee's speech - Normal Font
Interviewer's speech - Bold Font
Interviewee's actions - [Bold Font with Brackets]
And there were some spelling and punctuation errors as well.
damndest
Why is there two spaces?
Outbreak should be lowercase, and there should be a period.
One more piece of advice, try to flesh things out a bit more. Be more descriptive, and less, I don't know, bland? These people are talking as if it was scripted, try to somehow put more emotion in the words.
But I'm a shit writer myself, so I'm not really good with giving advice... I should try learning some things before criticizing others...
Ah well. I still like your story, I just think it could be improved some more...
Please don't take this is being harsh...
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(sorry it took so darn long to reply)
I'm a shit writer too. Hell, it took eight months for me to get off my bum and write something
Thanks for the advice
I'll do my damnedest to use it.
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No problem. Helping people is just what I do. :D
These words, they is beautiful. I need more.
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Thank you for the kind words
Nice, this has honestly enraptured me and I can't wait for you to update this (you know, after I read the next chapter)
I.. already have another fic going
This may be short, but it is quality, and I would rather have quality over quantity so this gets an A+ in my book.
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Im the same but I'm a tediously slow writer... Heck, I wrote this over the course of a month during my morning rides on the school bus