We arrived during the dead of night around 100 hours. * When used in a military sense it would read "zero one hundred" or "0100". Sorry it's one of those small things that bugs me. I said.shots I sitting on my flank playing with blocks. * I was The tiny orange unicorn im assuming is my sister is sitting beside me gnawing on a rubber chicken.* I'm As I stepped outside the brightness caused my eyes become strained.* to become Yay backstory. With a name like that I can see wanting to rule everything. Dust reminds me of Mordin Solus from Mass Effect. She seems calculating, efficient and really confident in her intelligence.
362941 Hey thanks for letting me know. I was proof reading and editing on my kindle last night and its really picky about how it auto corrects things. Some of it was probably just me being a derp. Lesson learned, sticking to the computer whenever i need to edit. Yea thanks again for the heads up and i didnt play mass effect but i heard how they screwed yall good with the third one. that sucks.
363081 I help where I can. And I ain't beat it yet but I think most of it is just people like to complain. And is it wring that I enjoy reading about guns so much? I'm thinking between this story and "The Last Sentinel" I'll be set for gun porn.
363130 yea I think its because they led you to believe that your choice in the 1st 2 would make a huge difference in the ending but I watched avideo and they're almost identical aside from different colored explosions. I saw the video with Hitler raging about it and it was hilarious.
I don't think your love for guns is wierd. My stories gonna be very combat oriented so there will be lots of gunplay.
407847 Thanks! glad you liked it. im working on ch6 right now and it should be done by the weekend. Also i took a look at your side story and liked it. A zebra with wings = badass
We arrived during the dead of night around 100 hours. * When used in a military sense it would read "zero one hundred" or "0100". Sorry it's one of those small things that bugs me.
I said.shots
I sitting on my flank playing with blocks. * I was
The tiny orange unicorn im assuming is my sister is sitting beside me gnawing on a rubber chicken.* I'm
As I stepped outside the brightness caused my eyes become strained.* to become
Yay backstory. With a name like that I can see wanting to rule everything.
Dust reminds me of Mordin Solus from Mass Effect. She seems calculating, efficient and really confident in her intelligence.
362941
Hey thanks for letting me know. I was proof reading and editing on my kindle last night and its really picky about how it auto corrects things. Some of it was probably just me being a derp. Lesson learned, sticking to the computer whenever i need to edit. Yea thanks again for the heads up and i didnt play mass effect but i heard how they screwed yall good with the third one. that sucks.
363081
I help where I can.
And I ain't beat it yet but I think most of it is just people like to complain.
And is it wring that I enjoy reading about guns so much? I'm thinking between this story and "The Last Sentinel" I'll be set for gun porn.
363130
yea I think its because they led you to believe that your choice in the 1st 2 would make a huge difference in the ending but I watched avideo and they're almost identical aside from different colored explosions. I saw the video with Hitler raging about it and it was hilarious.
I don't think your love for guns is wierd. My stories gonna be very combat oriented so there will be lots of gunplay.
loves it
Nice story mate cant say ive seen a story where a pony becomes a applejack anger keep up the great work
407847
Thanks! glad you liked it. im working on ch6 right now and it should be done by the weekend. Also i took a look at your side story and liked it. A zebra with wings = badass
this book makes me want more. its eating me alive im not shure if thats a good thing or bad thing
494980 idk but i think your crazy
494980 idk but i think your crazy>>495000 i am not crazy your crazy
your the one arguing with your self
true vary true