Aria was a legendary hero of Azeroth. However during the final confrontation with the greatest threat Azeroth has ever known, Deathwing the Destroyer, She sacrificed everything to save her friends. Now she has been sent to Equestria by a stoke of luck. Without her memories she must figure out what happened to her and why she cant remember her past. What dark secrets will she learn and uncover with the help of her new friends in Ponyville?
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I'm actually quite surprised, I looked at your account and it said that it's your first story.... and unlike some people who I read their second/third stories, you actually managed to pull a "perfect" grammar story O_O.....
However.... due to me not liking WoW a bit.... I hope you won't mention it too much in the story's future and....
is this your recap of EQD April 1st?
EDIT: After reading all three chapters..... I can conclude the perfect grammar is actually not so perfect.... but still it is readable and.... is it normal that it's so slow? I believe that after a prologue and 2 chapters, we should start seeing something, minor sure but stories tend to start up at chapter 1 or 2, these 2 additional chapters felt like an extension to the Prologue or at least Chapters 1 and 2 could have been combined
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Be careful so that you don't go to much mary sue on this
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hehe yea. I'll keep that in mind. Isn't the first backstory ive written for Aria though so it shouldn't turn into a mary sue fanfic. I wouldn't post a new chapter until that changed if it ever took that direction.