You could have a chapter where Twilight teams up with Rarity to teach Applejack the joys of being a lesbian. Plus Twilight probably wonders what its like of a Zebra and teach her some joys as well.
So, let me start by saying I'm two chapters in, and I really like this fic, but I find it leaves a bit of a sour taste in my mouth. Something about Twilight's attitude just seems... off. And I don't just mean she's out of character, which is debatable, but she just seems so... blazé about sex. That might be what you're going for, but it somehow makes the actual scenes... less interesting. It seems like there's no excitement for her, and by extension myself. Perhaps it just speaks to my opinion. Either way, take a like and a fave.
Hmm...a strange idea. Twilight's obviously taught her friends a lot about how to enjoy themselves with each other...but what about things involving guys? Get Big Mac involved, much to Applejack's bemusement-turned-arousal.
Another good one. The girls are summoned to Canterlot to deal with Discord, he starts his schpiel...
Rainbow: You know, after the things we've done recently...I can't help but think it just sounds like this guy needs to get laid...like, a lot! Discord: Wait, what? AJ: Say, when was the last time you got any, Discord? Discord: Well, I admit it's been a while... Pinkie: New friend for the orgy parties! Discord: Orgy parties? Sounds like my kind of time! Twilight: Say, Celestia, I don't suppose you know what all he can do in the bedroom. Celestia: No, I do not. Discord: Hardly my fault you were always too stuck up to- Twilight: In that case, why don't you and Luna join us this time? Pinkie: *gasp* Orgy party with the Princesses? RD: Awesome! Discord: You know, maybe plunging the entire world into chaos can wait a few hours- Twilight: Days. Luna: Weeks. Discord: ...where were you lot 1000 years ago? Pinkie: In a different show fighting Tirek. Discord: I like you already.
It's the sheer imaginative creativity of Twilight's magic use -- far above and beyond the usual "Twilight grows a magic dick on herself and/or her lover" -- that makes this one of the hottest clopfics I've seen.
I honestly found this chapter really creepy. Mostly because I see Twilight and Celestia as being mother-daughter, teacher-student relationship, so Celestia doing Twilight honestly strikes me as molestation because of that. Second, for some reason I'm not into Princest. Other incest is wincest, but this kind isn't for me. Regardless, still waiting on new chapters and I did enjoy this chapter.
“She's only mortal,” Celestia told her as they set her flat onto the bed, and draped a blanket over her. “Really, it's impressive she lasted as long as she did, especially after whatever you two did in Ponyville.”
I'm of the opinion that Twilight's transformation into an alicorn was born of her own power and achievements.
However I also believe that Celestia's song was a form of ritual magic that made the transformation easier, faster and cleaner than it would have been if Twilight had to transform alone.
I imagine that this version of Celestia's ritual won't be a song and while it will still be easier and faster, "cleaner," is probably debatable. Luna will also probably be upset if she isn't invited.
You could have a chapter where Twilight teams up with Rarity to teach Applejack the joys of being a lesbian.
Plus Twilight probably wonders what its like of a Zebra and teach her some joys as well.
things that would never happen in real life
Dont forget about the other mane six and there need for twilghts want it need it type of romance
Or is this it for the Teacher
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And that's why we write fanfics
So, let me start by saying I'm two chapters in, and I really like this fic, but I find it leaves a bit of a sour taste in my mouth. Something about Twilight's attitude just seems... off. And I don't just mean she's out of character, which is debatable, but she just seems so... blazé about sex. That might be what you're going for, but it somehow makes the actual scenes... less interesting. It seems like there's no excitement for her, and by extension myself. Perhaps it just speaks to my opinion. Either way, take a like and a fave.
Hmm...a strange idea. Twilight's obviously taught her friends a lot about how to enjoy themselves with each other...but what about things involving guys? Get Big Mac involved, much to Applejack's bemusement-turned-arousal.
Another good one. The girls are summoned to Canterlot to deal with Discord, he starts his schpiel...
Rainbow: You know, after the things we've done recently...I can't help but think it just sounds like this guy needs to get laid...like, a lot!
Discord: Wait, what?
AJ: Say, when was the last time you got any, Discord?
Discord: Well, I admit it's been a while...
Pinkie: New friend for the orgy parties!
Discord: Orgy parties? Sounds like my kind of time!
Twilight: Say, Celestia, I don't suppose you know what all he can do in the bedroom.
Celestia: No, I do not.
Discord: Hardly my fault you were always too stuck up to-
Twilight: In that case, why don't you and Luna join us this time?
Pinkie: *gasp* Orgy party with the Princesses?
RD: Awesome!
Discord: You know, maybe plunging the entire world into chaos can wait a few hours-
Twilight: Days.
Luna: Weeks.
Discord: ...where were you lot 1000 years ago?
Pinkie: In a different show fighting Tirek.
Discord: I like you already.
This story is just excellent!
It's the sheer imaginative creativity of Twilight's magic use -- far above and beyond the usual "Twilight grows a magic dick on herself and/or her lover" -- that makes this one of the hottest clopfics I've seen.
5343195 Too fricking hilarious. Though considering who you are I quess I shouldn't be suprised.
Question: Update?
I honestly found this chapter really creepy. Mostly because I see Twilight and Celestia as being mother-daughter, teacher-student relationship, so Celestia doing Twilight honestly strikes me as molestation because of that. Second, for some reason I'm not into Princest. Other incest is wincest, but this kind isn't for me. Regardless, still waiting on new chapters and I did enjoy this chapter.
are going to finsh your story
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Wow. Most of my favorite fetishes in one place...
*looks left*
*looks right*
*fap fap fap*
This was really fun to read, and quite amazingly written
Also, i think you helped me to gain apreciation of Twiligh/Spike, thanks for this
Is that next chapter ever going to come?
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Really wish this would get updated.
I'm of the opinion that Twilight's transformation into an alicorn was born of her own power and achievements.
However I also believe that Celestia's song was a form of ritual magic that made the transformation easier, faster and cleaner than it would have been if Twilight had to transform alone.
I imagine that this version of Celestia's ritual won't be a song and while it will still be easier and faster, "cleaner," is probably debatable. Luna will also probably be upset if she isn't invited.
3 cmc xD ella enseño