i got a question is ever mare in ponyville,and CMC will fall before Twilight and her compendium of sexy spells to

This was incredibly sexy. Here's to more sexy times.

Twilight gets all the ponies

Wow, Twilight as 'slutty city girl teaching the country cowpokes how to rumble' really works. Looking forward to this.

It'll totally need a sequel where she heads back to Canterlot for some 'unfinished business'...

EDIT: Granted, 'Vastly powerful mage uses her magic to overpower and sexually assault someone for calling her a liar' is rather erky, but as no attention was really drawn to that angle in the story, I'll assume it's one of those 'fuck'em 'til they like it' stories and just enjoy the ride.

I am intrigued. I do like it when Twilight is the domineering one.

Lo and behold,twilight is a slut

Incredibly sensual. Well done.

Great,Twilights going to be ponyvilles JFK.....Er......Anyways.....this was bloody hot?.....Damnit i ruined the boners of everyone with the JFK thing didnt i?

"Pen Is Mightier®"

You're sittin' on a gold mine Trebek!

I don't normally like human stories, but this is great. The background info Twilight gave on the towns and her personal history was intriguing, although the clop scene was particularly memorable for me. It was very hot, but the way Twilight played with Rainbow and the responses of Twilight's three friends throughout it were humorous and entertaining as well. Can't wait to see what other spells and techniques she has.

And how this may affect Rarity and Applejack. I wonder if Rarity will bring it up to Fluttershy on spa day.

Holy balls that was HOT!! please continue

say, this was pretty damn good! i need more!

twi gets all the bitches

You know you should make twilight a bit like Barney. Just the pick up challenge part.

You know what never mind. You can make her all Barney. Even the part where he makes up tales and made up theories.

Just to see twilight doing this, i will like fav and follow, was gonna like and fav anyhow but now i shall follow.

That was so fucking awesome and hot I loved it all so much and can't wait to see what happens next.

Good show! Jolly good show! I absolutely love the idea of Twilight being a sex freak!

Twilight you little devil

Do go on...

4254667 well you know what they say 'Its always the quiet ones you have to watch double so for this story because fluttershys a freak in this story to'

The actual reasoning behind this story - that Ponyville is conservative while Canterlot is progressive - actually makes sense. Canterlot is the nation's capitol, and most social changes in a nation originate either in the capitol or in areas of the nation far distant from the capitol, and then spread out from there. Ponyville, however, is a very rural community rooted in its traditions with a comparatively small population. It actually makes sense that Ponyville would be far more conservative than the cosmopolitan Canterlot...or even Manehatten (and I now have a sudden mental image of the real reason behind Suri stealing from Rarity is because Rarity misread Suri's signals, and completely missed Coco's in her reasons for helping later).

This looks like it's going to be a fun ride...that I'll have to take one chapter at a time. It's that well written, my body isn't up to more than one at a time. ...then again, I've always liked the 'disembodied molestation' fetish.

Ah, good ol sexy comedy. Always a favorite!

Awesome intro, great work.

Gives a whole new meaning to the phrase "meddle not in the affairs of Wizards."

While I know that a lot of readers on this site don't like this type of story I would suggest this first chapter at least for the comedy of it. The interaction between Twilight and Rainbow when she comes out of the bathroom is hilarious. Just picturing Rainbow Dash standing there staring slack jawed at Twilight as she does what she does got me laughing.

This was amazing. One thing, tho-At the end I'm pretty sure you meant Twilight to say, "You know what?" instead of, "You what?". Otherwise *Applauds*. That was so funny and HOT omg hot.

I haven't even read this fucker yet, but you get a like JUST out of sheer respect for the list of chapter descriptions in main description! I hate browsing for clop and stumbling upon an interesting concept, only for it to have 17 chapters labeled chapter 1 - chapter 17!

Human mane6 + Spike finaly become enjoyable ♡