Looks like i'm going to have to eat nom on my fking hat after this chapter... i hate and you people all at the same time... me and my fking honor...

3550231 becasue it's always a good think to have a poll.

Becasue see here when anyone make a fic they don't make it accter as pobbsle but rater make everone go ape shit in there fic saying like " AAAAAHHH MOSTER!!!!! " you get where am coming from it's getting old now...

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This is why i center around the military. There isn't much of that. I take the one note from the show and I need at least one action sequence in the second act.

3551686
Now I have to nom my hat... I wish i never promised that...

3551699 Ya there not that mech on info to work on with my fic but am trying with it

3552069
There never is. let's face it, what kind of info could you possibly get with any fan fics. i wrote my series based around the Evening Guard. What kind of information could possibly be available on the Luna's army? It's like trying to get an Elements of Harmony origins story before season 4.

3552116 ya i agged, hey did you see the ep? i love it not the best but it still great none the less

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It may only be described in one character and one character only. and that would be this \/

3552487 yup, but anyway back on topic here.

so ya am just running a poll of everone online and in fourms sites to see what is the best cares of actions

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well it does all depend of if it's the protagonist or not that has the AK. if it's the protagonist, then at most he would only shoot someone in the leg when threatened. if you wanna put a little suspension of disbelief on it you could say he's a new soldier that doesn't want to kill but will use it to threaten for his own safety. also depends on if he's human in Equestria or not. now if it's the antagonist, then he'll kill everything that threatens him. if you see the main characters differently. then do it that way.

3554206 Its a human protagonist, What do you thinking about a freedom fighter that is new and never truely fire his gun at a living bing but an animel?

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personally i have that ideal as well. but if i see that it is sentient and has reason, then i would hesitate

3554861 most likely i would be freaking out

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i freak out internally. so on the outside i would be stone cold. noone would even look at me wrong holding a weapon in that world

3554894 true.

Btw am looking into history of the freedom fighter movement i forgot what contry it is but it's a war that still is going on i biveil

3554894 OR i could put as a guy that survivor an out break of the H7N9, that own an illagle gun before shit hit the fan

3555049
what ever you feel like doing. I don't see an issue with either

3555648 ya true.

Btw what your take on the MLP world outside of the Pony country?

3555868
you mean like in terms of The Land of The Griffins and Saddle Arabia?

3555914 Ya i always wonder what truely the world of MLP like is it fully epaxple like how we did or is it still unknown by them still more land to find.

My thoery is that there wold is 5 times the size of our sun

3556177
no way. the gravity would kill everything in world. There is an official map of the world. Equestria is but one country. The Land of The Griffins is to the east and Saddle Arabia is to the west. the provinces of those countries are unknown. If you want to get technical, The Crystal Empire is its own country in the Frozen North. The Bad Lands to the south of Canterlot is like a national park for dragons. The Saddle Arabians are well, middle eastern and eastern society with tall earth ponies instead of unicorns and pegasi. Then there's The Land of The Griffins, a country that apparently does not have a set base in our reality. There seem to be French type of people there seeing as the only kind of griffin we've seen that is from there is a stereotypical Frenchman named Gustav (right down to the moustache). We have yet to see an England, Spain, Germany, ext. Those accents have been seen in some ponies so we can assume they exist. Equestria is seen as the America of that world. A melting pot complete with Indians losing land represented by the buffalo. That's my head cannon anyway.

3556403 Will try but than we see the moon and the sun do carzythings so anything gose if you think about it, so if the pleant i was thinking is 2 or 5 times our sun and that would have magic some how making work than my thoery can be right in a way but hey am just gusseing here

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Me: perhaps 2 times the size of the EARTH. But keep in mind the sun can wear 100 earths as a blue belt. It doesn't matter that our sun is small, but i think gravity has nothing to do with magic. evolution does. cause your saying a planet the size of a larger small star would either be completely uninhabitable or crush anything standing on its surface. what you're saying is 100% scientifically and geologically impossible.

Nexus: Nerd.

Me: Bite me ponyboy.

3556471 True, but there is a hard time beiveiling in time like that, i mean come on flying rocks that city are build on or world where theirs no world to speak of but a mix of lands flying in the air like noting to hold it up like in the movie avatar in a way.

We are talking about 2 ponies that can move a sun for crying out loud but any way.

Ya i always have seen there world bigger than ours

3556546
but that's magic. what you are talking about is a MASSIVE planet that has some form of anti-gravity. and that doesn't have any grounds in equestria. there is no proof of this in cannon or wiki.

3556594 true, but hey anything can happen

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Me: Call me Twilight, but that isn't scientifically possible.

Nexus: Well you two are stuck up.

Me: i will beat you with a messinesing spoon you metal legged freak.

Nexus: You're the one that made me smart guy.

3556634 btw am reading it right now it's good really but am going to read all of it before faving it

3556681
what one are you reading? there's like 5

3556722 almost at tree

3556722 the one we talking about guns

3556753
You mean The Element of Perseverance or one of the other ones? i realize you're commenting on this one but i've had people comment on one video and talk about another

3556761 ya this one

3556756
okay then this one

3556778 yup i let you know when am done

3556779
Well then shall we keep the conversation relevant to the fan fic. not to say this isn't intellectually stimulating exchanging the ideas that are not expressed by a work of fiction, but it does help to get feed back from fans. the apparent 92 people that like this

3557351 I read it and i love it.

Also i know what thunderclap is feeling i do and ever innovator out there, that when you make something people will buy and it's great but that fact is that no one think the long term run.

And as a gun maker myself i know how he feels too but not also that he felt the something that made the Tommy Gun he did it just like the kid in this fic wanting to sale it to the right people but sadly they sew no need and now thx to them not thinking about it now it's going to the wrong hands or hoof now.

On an other note here that story have good passing here not to fast or sale just about right in this fic you made, Also you make me feel sorry for the poor colt he have to pick now.

I gusse this is where the sniper is born now where he'll be.

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Just wait until shit really hits the fan and Thunder-hfjekfifirhfjfioruleyriroejfiytjfpethfpejgojpdufoehfknfodht. Ow. Okay then. It seems lighning will strike me from a certain cobalt robopony if i ruin the surprise. Ass hole

3559169 You know if it was not for bad things people yes great weapons than thos weapons will never see day light.

Like the misslane bomb that use brids to fly it in the air to hit an emime shirp.

Hell one time we use bats to bombs a chnia weapons factor but thx to one supid mother fucker of droping the box of bomb bats now the USA lose there own air base but hey at less the testing run was great but you can gusse why they didn't want to re use it

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Like i said. Things might not go as people accpect.

3559675 Btw i love how you put how he made the guns and what problems he run into, that right there make the story great and feel more real most people would go like this

" after many trys he find the right one to build " that right there is lazyness at it's finst for it they story like beveiled.

I would like how to epxlen why it didn't work will for using that type of round or what not.

Like how he didn't use an iron round for his ammo, but go with something like brass.

Too bad i was not there to tell him that you can make a rimfire round that cost ceaper to make and easy to make in big #, and to tell him that steel and aluminum is just as good to make ammo out of, but the thing is aluminum can be use as a round but sadly it can't hold ther pursser of the round so you can reload it but steel sure most steel rounds are hard to reload but they will less alot longer than brass rounds

3559724
That is why we use copper and brass in real life. He's Spangle's apprentice so he knows what hes doing

3559764 Ya, you know it's kinda werid to think about it.

When you think about it us humans take yrs before what his using now. but them they just use speras and bows for just yrs and than make one huge ass jump in war time tech?!

3559883
One small step became a giant leap. Besides, they already had muzzle loaders for a while before the lever action was consieved.

3559899 ya but for how long i mean we have muzzle loaders for what yrs like if i remeber it was 13th century to the end and after the civil war than we made the rimfire round ( and it's still being in use today mind you ) until we made the laver gun his using in this fic

I think is when someone made something new to fire the ball i gusse was use that

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I think your gun history is rough. Lever action came before bolt action. Tue boolt was simpler and more reliable. The lead ball was not replaced by copper jakceted bullets until the bolt action. The winchester shot a lead torpedo style round still called a ball.

3560064 no i mean is that we didn't make guns that load from the back ( the one that truely did work and not blow up ) was bring or was it after the Civil War with the lever action gun and the handgun revolver with the navy gun that shot 5 rounds but than it was still was a mussle loader before the Rimfire rounds come to play and re plus the cap and ball that use to rule the wild wast

3559529
the Bat bombs were used against Japan, not china..

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Correct.