In the warmth of her cloud home, Rainbow Dash is about to turn in for the night when she hears Scootaloo crying outside in the middle of a vicious blizzard. Plucking the freezing filly from the snow, Rainbow hopes to provide some much-needed comfort for the otherwise tough young pegasus, but she uncovers a disturbing reality that she knows she cannot handle alone.
Knowing only one pony that could really help her out, Rainbow enlists Twilight’s help, determined to set things straight for Scootaloo. But what Rainbow doesn’t know is that in her efforts to provide a better life for the filly, her friendship with Twilight will develop into something more.
Edited by Alcatraz, Rated Ponystar, Rocinante, Ponysopher, Marshal Twilight, Knight of Cerebus, ShimmeringStallion, and Jake The Army Guy
Proofread by Neko Majin C
gotta love scootalove. its best love.
Hnnnnnnnnnngh so adorable
3497996>>3498021 Thanks, I'm glad you guys approve! To be honest, it was nice to write a cute story!
Oh, thank god. Going by your track record, I feared this would be a foalcon fic. Will read shortly.
3498030 HELL. NO. I hate foalcon. You will NEVER see me write that kind of garbage.
3498029
cute stories are my down fall lol.
i love them.
Aw... Not bad at all.
Well done.
~Skeeter The Lurker
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3498041 That image doesn't work lol
3498039 Thanks bud!
3498037 Hehe, who doesn't?
3498044
Well, that's bothersome. Have the long version of the url then.
--arcum42
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Cutest story ever!
3498054 Nice! Thanks bud!
it was good it needs a seqal so dash can adopt her or somethan but it was good
How has this not reached the feature box?
I
this! This is soooo super!!
3498058
np. At least two other admins of Twilight's Library have commented on the story already anyways...
--arcum42
To be honest it was a well story, could have been longer but still, I give it 8 out of 10 cupcakes...with lots of icing.
3498063 I was considering it. I have way too many story ideas that need to be written though.
3498071 Haha dang, really? Who?
3498034
Excellent.
3498065 Five minutes after I uploaded it, the story was literally in the number 1 position in the popular stories box, just waiting to get in. I was literally that close lol.
3498081 Good, good... I like icing.
3498083
Mayhem Darkshadow and Skeeter the Lurker are both admins. Of course, I'm the founder...
--arcum42
Cute. The perfect description for this. Its just so dang cute!
Gotta love some well-written Scootalove.
Feel like maybe it could have been fleshed out a little more, though, because just over 2500 words is a pretty low word count considering all the material this story covers. But even so, I really enjoyed it.
Have an upvote and a fav, my good fellow!
3498255 Ummm... you didn't fav my story
Edit: There it is lol
3498260
Got hung up on something for a second. Sorry.
3498264 Haha, it's cool bud.
I have read countess Scootadash stories.
I love them all.
Yours is no exception.
Have a like, fav, and follower
3498395 Thanks!
I feel like if Rainbow found out that Scootaloo's parents were beating her, making a joke about being out in the cold is FAR from the first thing she would do.
I know that if I were in her position, and I had some little kid that always looked up to me and stuff, and I found out that said kid had a family that was abusive, I would go to that house and beat them into submission and rehab.
Little Scoots is one of the best of ponies
Why do I read these
I cant stand the amount of feels
11/10
I think the only thing that broke my immersion was at the beginning. Rainbow Dash heard crying from inside her house during a blizzard, meanwhile Scootaloo didn't notice her standing in front of her shouting. A little inconsistent.
Still, not bad for under 3k one-shot.
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First, tend to the child. THEN rain retribution upon the wicked.
Aaaand... FEATURED.
Congrats!
Great story, I dont know what it is about these two but they give me the feelz instantly. so feelz, such sad, wow.
I think you should continue the story....
I do love the Scootlove's formula and it is a nice fic, but it feels a little rushed
Dammit, why cant I hold all these feels?
3499059
Yes Sir Draco!!!
3497996 Truer words have never been spoken.
This deserves to be fleshed out more. You have an excellent base idea going! It doesn't have to be 200k word monster, but I think stretching the story out more would be FANTASTIC!
3498816 The thing is that Rainbow barely heard something, and as she listened really hard, she was able to barely her somepony's voice. As for Scootaloo, she was in a daze, not paying attention to where she was going.
I want to play Fight Song by Sister Sin, ride into Scoots parents house with a sledgehammer and a drunk goat and steamroll the place
I hope it turns out well for her. Good one shot. many feels
It really bugs me when an author makes a oneshot, and then leaves the chapter name "Chapter 1" at least name the chapter after the story if you can't think of a new chapter title.
3499420 Eh. Fair enough.
Done.
3499420 Better?