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BirdyTheEarthPony


I take as much time out of my day as i can and dedicate that to writing!

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Ethan, an 18 year boy in his final year of high-school had been feeling....wierd. Something was off and he couldnt quite put his finger on it. He spent time to reflect on his life, his constant success, emotional masks, bouts of depression, and deep questioning of the meaning of life. Deciding that he must just be in an emotional slump, Ethan barely notices things missing from his everyday life. But that soon changes as one day everything just disappears, and a new life is set before him, where he must rebuild his life; block by block.

Chapters (15)
Comments ( 58 )

Well, that was realy good! Keep it up can't wait for more:pinkiehappy:

Very cool concept. I don't always read Human to Pony fics, but, when I do, it's this one.

BTW... Our humans are both named Ethan!

At first i thought this was going to be a minecraft crossover:twilightoops:

This is so incredibly thought provoking.
What if i am some otherworldy being, but i am just in a coma and have lived the life of a human?:rainbowderp::rainbowderp::rainbowderp::rainbowderp::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

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Ha, can't wait to write more! Can you say all night writing binge?

Good, can't wait for chapter 4

Good, can't wait for more

seems a bit rushed to me, but what do i know i cant even make a name for a character in a game.

and i was just trolled i finish reading what was up and there is then another one right after that i didn't notice.

It does feel kind of rushed but that was really the last chapter that I think will be that way. Now that I have a good base the real writing begins!:rainbowdetermined2:

This is certainly interesting thought, Ill keep trucking on til latest chapter.

All of this is quite good, I'm still curious on how he'll deal with making a relationship of some sort with his mother.

this is excellent, more please

Though I did see a BUNCH of capitalization mistakes, this is a very good story so far. Keep up the good work.


Random Quote: Diggy Diggy Hole I'm Digging a Hole
-Simon for the Yogscast

Ah how I do want to smell Twi's pillow( that came out wrong). Also YAY for another chapter, you these chapters faster than I can do Algebra II.



Random Quote: Let the Rage of Sparta, Fuel you blades Kratos
- Athena from God of War 3

Hes gonna wake up the next morning with Twilight next to him.

It looked like it were going to be a kiss but it finished with "I don't have a dad either.." ha :rainbowlaugh:

Oh heck yes. Character development, you got dem. You sir is a natural at writing. 34968073473407569327672587657932/5 stars




Random Quote: EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEYUP
- Big Mac

Whoa, this is getting intense.

and that boom, I can't shake the feeling that it is Rainbow Dash.

Also Redheart needs to make up to him, I could see where she's coming from but nevertheless lying about being a parent isn't great way to go.

This fanfic is slowly paving it's way into my favorite list :D

Now this is interesting but sad at the same time
can't wait for part 10. woulden't it been funny if you sayed it was over now

This chapter is good, make sense at the same time. Proceed!

just read all the way from chapter 1

You just got yourself a new reader!:raritywink:

I would like a if next chapter had something like, Chestnut is going rock climbing and askes Ethan to join him
Good chapter

Tired and Exhausted are synonyms:trollestia: you mad bro?:pinkiehappy: Cool chapter though.

Yup, so worth the wait. AGAIN!
Lets see here um, we have out love interest, we got out father figure, and we got an update. WOOOOHOOOOOO:pinkiehappy:



Random Quote: LETS PARTEH
- -------> :pinkiehappy: <-------
That mare

MAYBE SPOILER ALERT

I'm pretty sure Chestnuts date is RainbowDash

Dis gunna be good

I bet that chestnut's date is... Rainbow Dash and some shit will go down in the next chapter

I don't know why, but I am getting a bad vibe about this whole situation, oh and good job on the update.

Okay, I want to say a few things.

#1: I totally called RainbowDash being with Chestnut, but it was kind of obvious, so I can't give myself too much credit.:twilightsheepish:

#2: Shit's going down when he gets back to town:rainbowderp:

Ouch' hope he find out the truth and push to be with Rainbow Dash and that Chestnut should buck off.

Well ........ uh Shit just Shit. Wow Im speechless just wow



Random Quote: No, not this time. Im quite socked to do one of these.

This is crazy...
I don't realy know what to do now.


Keep up the good work and keep the chapters coming.

Now this...This is interesting

OH MY GOOOOOOOO UPADTE. MY MIND IS EXPLODING RIGHT NOW AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH*CRRRRRRRRR*:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:



R- *ERROR*:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

I'm writing the update now, but I have been busy the past few days and the one day I had to write my mind decided to pull a no think day. This might take a little longer but I assure you it will come.

1. HELL YOU E-MAN KICK HIS FLANK.
2. FINALLY A CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Random Quote: Da Fu
-My reaction to my friend humping a wall with a slushie in his hand while wearing a shredded hat.

*prays that RD and him fix it and get together like they originally planned*

*Pray that they all break down crying, 'cause that's what I like*

The only thought on my mind after reading the ending of the chapter is Bioshock, Andrew Ryan quote: "A man chooses, a slave obeys, KILL ME!"

Why is the story saying Firefly instead of Rainbow Dash in some parts during the confrontation with chestnut. I am sure it said Rainbow Dash earlier. I am really starting to question my brain and sanity because of this.

Okay my iPod is replacing Rainbow Dash (RD) with Firefly for some reason. I feel insane right now
This is also testing my mind and iPod.

Now what happens when Rainbow Dash learns of Trixie being together with him?

Battle of love will begin!

Is it weird that when I read this awesome fic, that I imagine myself as the protagonist because we share the same views of the world, age, and the fact that my name is also Ethan?:derpyderp2:

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