Flancy Mernin didn't really think that tampering with those artifacts(at least not too much) was a good idea. Maybe drawing on them is what set them off? Or was it using them as gallbladder content jugs? Or maybe trying to fuse them together for fun?
But whichever one of those it was, it still made the artifacts go totally batshit crazy enough to unleash whatever magical powers they had on the eight of them,sending them straight(Yet kinda wiggly, too?) to the place where brightly colored hoofbeasts were one of many top civilizations. Reaper, of course, in his snooty, navy blue blood way, didn't like this idea. The others seemed a bit bothered by it, too, though not as much. Besides, think of all the havoc...er, fun that could happen!
I do not own MLP: FIM or its characters, nor do I own Homestuck.
As of currently, I do not yet have an editor, and anyone who would like to take on that role can!
Critique is appreciated, and I hope you enjoy!
WARNING
I am more than likely the worst procrastinator this dimension has ever seen; therefore, this is the reason that I ask you, no, BEG YOU, to yell at me for taking too long to update or some such.
ANOTHER WARNING
I am not likely to ever get back to this as I, whilst spending time pretty much ignoring this story, have found several flaws in the characters and plotline. This means that the story, if I ever get back to it, will have some serious reworking and rewriting.
3495801 Yes please, that would be helpful by a lot!
This fanfiction is pretty awesome so far. It has a great mystery behind the girl's "magic" stuff and griffin thingymabobber animal.
I hope you continue further with this story.
On a side note, you need to skip lines between each paragraph, which will make it look less like a blob. Still a great story, though.
P.S: I really like the use of the colored text, because it really puts contrast on the otherwise white letters. (That is, you have white lettersif you use the black color scheme. I like that because it helps me focus more, and it puts less strain on my eyes because of the less bright letters and screen.)
Is she a spy?
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I agree with the other guy said. Just make it seperate.
Like and a fav I guess
If u want a follow u gotta follow me.
But 4 now a fav and a like
I have a theory are the trolls getting pushed into there bodies or something? is that why these ponies are passing out?