A guy with too much time on his hands. Enjoys writing and over-analyzing things.
Celestia has a hobby. A very expensive and resource-consuming hobby. A very expensive and resource-consuming hobby that Luna feels is going a bit too far. Stained glass windows are nice and all, but Celestia is really beginning to overdo it.
Page generated in 0.235 seconds
Total duration
851 users online
1,251,598 hits today, 2,054,621 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Is it me or does Princess Celestia have an obsession with windows?
Luna has encountered a problem with Windows...
I have got to learn not to eat anything while reading your stories. almost spit apple all over my screen.
Poor twilight. Generations will forever remember you as the Princess of Horrible Dancing.
Oh no... this.. is going to be good, unless you are Luna.. alright mouth free, let's see what we got.
Aaaand.. well wasn't what I was expecting, but damn good. yeah Tia is going just a wee bit to far with her toys.
Yup I'm sure she has
.
That... that window. So, what will Cadance have to do to get ponies to remember HER as the Princesses of 'love' rather then Luna. but seriously.. that window... that is awesome.
Okay.. DO IT! wait wait... no i know what it needs to play.
Since Tia is really trying to get Luna to start a rebellion or something.
Yeah, that is bad. Plus, it's stepping on Pun-Pony's turf... you really don't want to do that.
Saw that coming
okay, this was a really great little story. Nice build up, feeling rather serious, then just getting more and more ridiculous and hilarious as it goes. Yet never turning into a farce. Tia's reasons, make sense, and they feel.. well real. Like something she would want. As well as why now. But Luna's points, also very true.
Also explains why the RCV was so built in, if they had to shout everyone into submission to get them to do anything. But just a sudden thought.
Once again, your characters all feel alive, real, complex. You can understand their thoughts, connect to them. And the humor is amazing, while still leaving room for a bit of seriousness, that never quite comes off as mood whiplash. The slow build up of more and more ridiculous windows. The plans for other things she could do. Luna's concern. There's nothing here I didn't love.
Splendid!
I wouldn't go so far as to call this brilliant, but it's certainly something...
Nice.
It's nice.
It's been a while since I've read a nice story. Not a deep, touching, gut busting or saddening story, but a story, rather, that is just a little nice to read. I chuckled at this, but I didn't quite make it to a chortle. It hit that perfect balance between mediocre and epic: nice.
Yes, indeed, this is a nice story. It is nicely written, nicely explained, and nicely characterized, and I sincerely hope to see nice stories like this in the future.
Keep up the
goodnice work.from silly to unexpectedly serious and back to silly flawlessly.
impressive.
I saw this in the feature box, saw the summary, looked harder at the glorious title image and said to myself, "yeah, that looks like that could be quite good" and then I looked at the author and said "oh, it's JapaneseTeeth. It will definitiely be good."
I was not wrong.
4415980 When I saw how long this comment was, I figured it was you.
4421602 Yeah, that was the single most difficult aspect of this story. I very nearly cut out the "serious" bits because I wasn't sure I could make it fit in with the rest of the story. Good thing I left it in.
4421892 Glad to know I have a good reputation.
I am in awe, good sir.
4422248 Still waiting for the time I make a comment, longer then the chapter I'm commenting on. Already did it with some full liveblog reviews.
4422672 At least I don't have to worry about you leaving giant comments on every chapter of my ongoing story. Would probably make an epic read, though.
4422761 Tempted, very very tempted. If I wasn't already doing that for...
Days of Wasp and Spider
Hooves of Fate
Planet Hell
The Crisis Equestria Liveblog..
Pre-reading Sereg's stuff....
yeah, kind of draining doing that much, but it's so worth it most of time. I'll get to that one eventually
Over a hunny upvotes and not one down. That's a rare talent you've got, there.
[notbad.jpg]
So thanks for that.
4423592 I'm saying it mostly because I know you aren't big on inter-mane 6 shipping stories.
4425869 Heh true, though with your writing, might still be worth it.
4426084 Well, if you ever get around to it, we'll see.
I mean, I have gotten positive feedback from people who don't usually like shipping, but still.
Very nice. The humor and touch of seriousness was great.
200th like!
I loved this story. Although I did not laugh, I enjoyed it. 
more and more
_______________________
Adorable. Simply adored this fic.
Neat.
Notice.
Notice how there are 0 dislikes.
LUNA APPROVETH!
4437696
Looks like you jinxed it!
4437696
Of course someone would take that as bait to hit the dislike button.
You had to say that, didn't you?
4415876 Congratulations, you win the internet. And the game. And at life.
4497011
Yes. Yes I did. No shit, Sherlock!
I always enjoys stories like this, with the silly premise and the hints of seriousness deeper in.
That was a fun story.
It was simply divine !
Honestly i really didn't expect this story to be such funny.
img3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20121212043924/adventuretimewithfinnandjake/images/d/da/Trollestia.png
looks like Trollestia will never dies ^^
I think this story needs a sequel.
I mean you already had Celestia mentioning that the previous castle was more like a funhouse so why not have Luna act as a tour guide for a class or three of foals (perhaps Cheerilee's class to start with?) with Twilight first giving them her impression (always serious and perhaps more then a little confusing/convoluted) of this feature and then Luna telling them it's true purpose with perhaps a funny story about it being used or how it came to be added in the first place.
Celestia could even stop by to prank several of the bullies trailing behind the classes for the heck of it.
:Iwishtherewasoneforluna:
Extremly fun storie thanks for sharing
I don't even know
Fun story! Another great comedy from you.
That last part made me laugh a lot . Great comedy story glad I found it
that made me think of this cartoon:
http://erictheblue.deviantart.com/art/Enemy-Mine-353656769
It's a rare story that can pull off such tonal shifts and still feel coherent. Very well done indeed. Thank you for it.
So many topics in a short Story... Lovely
PRICELESS
Priceless re-reading