Each of the chapters of this fic is an independent story featuring one of the Mane Six having an encounter with the supernatural. They are presented as one story because of their common theme. The stories are:
Fluttershy: The Curse of the Night When Angel falls sick, Fluttershy ventures into the Everfree Forest at night to find a remedy. Though she faces danger, she escapes... but not unchanged.
Rarity: Blood and Water You know the story. Rarity gets seduced by a creature of the night, and her friends don't realize what's happening until it's too late. They find the vampire who turned her and destroy him. But then what happens?
Rainbow Dash: The Big Battle Discord's defeat didn't erase every trace of his influence on Equestria. Fortunately, hard-working ponies are already gathering the remnants of his power into Manehattan for easy disposal. What could possibly go wrong?
Pinkie Pie: Gallows Humor Pinkie Pie, Ponyville's premiere prankster, is dead. So why haven't the pranks stopped?
Applejack: One of the Herd Applejack may be in charge of Ponyville's biggest farming community, but that doesn't mean she can't take a break now and then. Besides, tonight's meteor shower should be even better than last night's...
Twilight Sparkle: The Case of Wild Clover the Warder It's a boring day in Canterlot, and Twilight Sparkle has time to kill. Maybe picking up an old lot of books will brighten her mood.
Feedback and error-spotting welcome!
Brilliant!! lovely take on the werewolf style. I hope you do one for Swamp thing or perhaps the mummy.
If I may make a suggestion, wendigos are quite interesting.
I like it a lot. Of course I'm a sucker for the classic Universal monsters so that was kind of inevitable.
But anyway, I'm looking forward to whatever comes next. (especially if it's Twilight meets Frankenpony)
I like all the
Mad props on this one, LOVE IT. Can't wait to see the rest. Although i wouldn't care if you continued just this one instead
i agree with dr. bob's idea, but i can imagine rarity doing something like a frankenpony.
SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!!
Oh yeah. Putting this series under a watch.
Um, slenderer? Is that even a word?
I don't read many fics that give me so few ways to correct them.
Thanks for all the positive feedback! I hope the second story pleases as well as the first. (And yes, 'slenderer' is a word. I looked it up.
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Quick question: Are the changes going to remain from chapter to chapter? Or is each chapter a separate continuity?
Quick question: Are the changes going to remain from chapter to chapter? Or is each chapter a separate continuity?
Love this story (Rarity would make a GREAT vampire) heres hoping the next thing is swamp thing (sense the monster was born cause of science i see a violet unicorn being the one to cause it.)
Here's hoping for monster-Twilight next
Also, a very interesting read. I love the fact that you put the more classical vampire in.
Huh, you know this is a good chapter (I'm going to assume you left the end open so that readers can draw their own conclusions about what'll happen to Rarity) but actually... As good as the rest of it is... I really find myself wondering what the pony vampire hunter's story is. I assume he's meant to be an analogue to Van Helsing? Where did he come from, how did he get here, is he just Van Helsing only ponified or are there differences between him and his human counterpart? I'd kinda like to see another story with him in the starring(or at least a greater) role.
That said, excellent chapter.
good stories! i like the fluttershy one better (but i am more of a werewolf fan to begin with
). can't wait to see what you do next!
These are pretty great so far, and I'm sure the next four will be just as good.
Well, I'm sure three of the next four will be good. I'm not entirely certain how you'll pull off Pinkie as a monster without the whole thing just getting silly.
Hehe. Nice stories. I await more impatiently. Keep it up.
vamp rarity, cool. hmm.. i wonder what sort of thing's gonna happen to dashie... or AJ... this will be something to pay attention to.
The only problem i saw was a mishap with 'shys orignal eye color...... but silver, not green. Her eyes are a teal-ish color. Great job, though!
Beautifully written, such poetic prose to go with an excellent story. I look forward to seeing what else you will create in this series.
Beautiful ending, I loved how you made it that she was free of her over-shyness. And I LOVED the whole werewolf take, werewolves are the best 'monster' creature
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Each chapter will be its own continuity; for one, it'd be a bit silly if each of the Mane Six were a different sort of thing simultaneously, and for another, it lets me mix up the tones of the stories a bit. (Rainbow Dash's is going to be over the top, while Applejack's is going to be the darkest of the lot.)
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My intent there was to say that Fluttershy's eyes had changed from the corrupted green to the purified silver; if you think you can make that clearer, feel free to PM me with your suggestion!
Can't wait to read the next chapters! When do you suppose they'll be done?
....well it was better than Twilight, I'll give you that... I just hope the effects of these stories stay with the mane cast from chapter to chapter. It would be unfair if only a few of the ponies got super skills from after their ordeal and others are left unchanged. Also I don't approve of Rarity staying a vampire. Take her addiction of blood or something but don't keep her a vampire! Also i'm crossing my fingers for a conclusion that either makes the mane six epic Halloween creatures or something that removes any and all effects....Also, ten pony points to you for having pinkie jump out of the ground with a mallet!
13188 Good to know. You learn something new every day.
Wonderful writing once again, I thoroughly enjoyed your story, despite the fact that the idea of Rarity suffering like this actually causes me physical pain.
You have a gift my friend, keep doing what you're doing.
This story is a well-written take on the werewolf mythology! I deeply enjoyed it.
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As I previously commented, each story will be in its own continuity. I might do a seventh story, some sort of inter-continuity mashup, but only if I think I can pull it off.
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You're in luck! "Rainbow Dash: The Big Battle" is up right now!
That was indeed over the top. Im now glad that there all separate...you are either the best dark humor writer ever or your insane...see you need time...(make an epilogue musical with all of them dancing to the monster mash!!!) oh and I want z-z-z-zombie ponies!!!!
Great Stories as a fan of Stoker's Dracula it was great to see a story that had the Vampires or Horsferatus (pardon the pun) powers only diminishing in the sun, not like many others were it kills the vampire.
HO-LEE-SHIT.
As a huge Godzilla and Kaiju fan, this was so freaking awesome... I don't even know where to begin...
Masterful. Truly MASTERFUL.
I also recommend this music when the giant lizard first becomes... you know, giant and terrifying. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o6qAIaqK3_Q
P.S.
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For the love of God, DO IT.
It'd be like the Avengers movie but with heroic monster ponies... and it would be GLORIOUS, I mean... you have no idea how awesome this would be to see.
And given how well you write the individual stories, I think you could pull it off
I must say, I never expected Godzilla & Ultraman to be used in this story. Nice job. I really liked the whole fight scene. It felt like an actual giant monster movie.
So, I'm guessing this went along the lines of a Godzilla Vs. Mothra Fight, Correct? Because the only other two flying Kaiju I can think of are Rodan and King Ghidora and both of their fighting styles don't match what Rainbow did during the fight. That and the fact that one of Mothra's forms is called RAINBOW Mothra.
WOW! i never expected a godzilla/ultraman bit!! good work!!!
So... Dash turned into Ultraman (or would Ultramare be more appropriate?). Huh. That's... quite possibly the best thing ever. Like, ever. Completely.
That was great from the a point of view of a Brony and a Gojira fan (or does Otaku fit better with that?) Kaiju Ponies for the win
Okay, so I the whole thing with Ultraman(never really was a fan of that one) flew right over my, but I still say the fight was more like a battle between Godzilla and Mothra. And yes I am the same anonymous that posted a couple of hours ago.
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Okay, so I the whole thing with Ultraman(never really was a fan of that one) flew right over my head, but I still say the fight was more like a battle between Godzilla and Mothra. And yes I am the same anonymous that posted a couple of hours ago.14594
It absolutely disgusts me that this story only has 4.7 rather than the 5.0 it deserves
Okay, I was honestly thinking you were going to be doing the traditional hollywood monster pantheon. I mean, you already did werewolves and vampires, I figured that next would be swamp monsters, living blobs, maybe bigfoot/sasquatch or aliens.
I was honestly not expecting Godzilla and/or Ultraman.
Not saying that this is bad, just... Wow.
Keep it up!
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Dude... Pinkie should totally turn into a living blob thing... Like a pink, gelatinous, shapeshifty blob...
That'd fit her so well, you know, since she eats so much. And she'd get even more bouncy and she'd look like pudding.
Watched Ultraman right before reading so this was double awesome!
All I can say is "MOAR!"
Ha ha, wow. I was wondering what sort of monster Dash was going to get. I didn't see this coming and it fits her to a tee. Well done!
I'll be honest, I enjoyed this less than I did the last two. That may be at least partially because I'm less familiar with Kaiju than I am with Vampires and Werewolves, but I just thought I should mention it.
SIX STARS. FIFTY. ALL OF THE STARS.
I love pony stories like this that are just off the wall and yet still stick so true to the feel of the show!
All of the chapters so far have been incredible.
If there's one thing I like more than vampires and werewolves, it's Godzilla.
So far this chain of stories is turning out wonderfully. Keep it up!
I was expecting the Godzilla, but Ultradash? So Awesome!
If you do go through with that final crossover, I will shower you with hugs.