Rainbow Dash is hit with news that crushes her dreams. She'll never get the chance to be a Wonderbolt.
Upset and shutting herself out from the world, Rainbow considers just hiding away...
Until a butter-yellow ray of hope pierces the darkness.
Entry for The Fluttershy Fan Club 80+ members contest.
The Prompt: Write the most heartwarming story you could of Fluttershy. It should be easy to make this an Everyone rated story.
(This story contains much fluff. If there was a fluff tag, which there needs to be, this fic would have it)
Chapters (1)
Reviewing Taime!
Everything Wrong with An Act of Kidness
Spoilers!!
(duh)
You know, you could've showed that explanation from Spitfire to Rainbow Dash, i would love to see her reaction. 1
Also, if Spitfire said she couldn't join the Wonderbolts because politics and all that, then why did she even allow Rainbow to enter the academy? Just not to crush her dreams but then have to make her waste time to just crush them anyway? 2
You know, you could have gone on that sentence longer, it was just the first recruit, there still many others. 3
Seriously, Rainbow Dash was worried because of the promise she made to her friends rather than herself? i mean, it's not like you promised to protect their lives or anything, why is she so worried? 4
Also, mealingless drama. 5
So Fluttershy is her milk-mare? 6
Ba dum tss *facepalm*
Im pretty sure they would do a bit of research because saying it was foul play and favoritism with the princesses, heck, they don't even make part in this! 7
*Fulfill 8 Sorry, the grammar nazi in me couldn't resist.
CLICHÉ LINE ALERT 9
Sin Tally: (Pause for dramatic effect) 9
Sentence: This isn't a shipper fic!?
9/10 Mustaches.
I like it.
D'AAAAAWWWWWW
Can I add your history to a group?
6109057 My history? If you mean the story then go ahead.
6111028 I like that you came up with a very valid reason why she might not be able to join. Keeping it that realistic really sells the point of this story. Well done.