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DarthMalentai


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Adrian is a nice person who came from a sadder background than expected. Unfortunately he is sent to Equestria mysteriously and cannot fathom why he was picked. He is just as confused as the princesses as to why he appeared.

Note: I will try to make this funny but there is no assurances. And there might be a shift in rating if I make this darker or more interesting.
Also if there are any problems with this let me know cause I am very interested. No I will not chew you out for your ideas, I just like hearing others opinions.
Currently being revised/edited/Proofread by milibron212.

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 42 )

3476682
As mean as I feel. (he wont die but I will antagonize him and get him in trouble if I can) :eeyup:

3477042
he will be main antagonist from my current outlook but there is a true Antagonist that should already be clear when you look deep into the story. :eeyup:

Regardless of whether you are brave or just steadfast in your teachings, anything can be afraid of the true dark. :pinkiecrazy:

3477061
you misunderstand. he is only physical BUT he is.. well just a nuiscance. the true antagonist is revelaed in chapter 4,

3477061
At most Blueblood will hurt OC. But physical goes away while the mental troubles from your past always hurt no matter the time it has been.

3477085
I am trying to make Blueblood a physical antagonist but I just thought of switching that to make this a more self harm story. tehee. this will be fun to write.:pinkiecrazy:

3477095
well keep in mind. I made a tempermental Blueblood. I can really only write when my mind is loose. I don't know if he'll smack or kick OC. But I will try to tone down Blueblood against OC violence. (I am not a big Blueblood fan but I love the fact that he complains in every story. That gave me a basis for that Celestia and Blueblood conflict in chapter 2)

3477125
oh heh. with how I plan it there will be some dickiness but that will only be retaliation from other external events involveing OC. (most involving just stupid accidents). Oh and Ignore the dream Blueblood. Think about this: You pop in and say something that offends him and he blasts you. how do you feel? That ball of light HAS scared Adrian just to warn you. And since this is a First Person based story this will be opinionated. Might add at somepoint where Blue just tolerates Adrian then a big accident then Blue fun time

An interesting take on an HiE story. I would like to see where this goes. :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by Charzoid deleted Nov 20th, 2013

So did blueblood actually attack him at some point like after he fainted or did he attack with magic when he insulted him?

3513898

Adrian -> Insult thus causing Blueblood to react.
Blueblood launched a energy bolt at Adrian. Thus ruining Adrians pajamas.(bottom and top)
So it was a reaction based about the insult. I was writing Blueblood a little self-conscious I think.
No attack after it was all spell related.

He should be lucky he only got told off. Attacking other creatures just for words is not okay, not for a prince, not for anypony.

3556228
I have really forgotten when this would have started. But notice Luna's change so I can't really tell. (Brain can't remember which came first.)

3556228
I hope it's before the Gala—otherwise, Princess let-me-congratulate-you-on-ruining-the-party kind of looks like a huge hypocrite!

3559211
let's agree it started after the Rarity thing. :eeyup:

3586382
You like this story, don't cha?

Something causes her to smile, and my only guess is a little Blueblood in a diaper. How on earth that would be cute is beyond me.

/cough/

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If Adrian doesn't find that at least a tiny bit cute, I worry for his soul.

3610230
He would dance the dance of his people.

3609674
Thank you for the image. I am not a Blueblood supporter so yea. Unlike Moony I was going to be more cruel but I realized that how I had it this story would have died faster than I imagined.

3612238
I don't know I was screwing with you.:trollestia:

3614107
With how I have it planned....Everyone is gonna get raped.

Intersting beginning... can't wait to read the next chapter... here we go!

This is kinda funny... I cannot wait for the next instalment!

3824174
Once I can think of what the hell to have in the next chapter. :raritydespair:

3826770 I really do know this feel... I hope you can figure it out... :pinkiehappy: Its a really intersting story thus far... :rainbowkiss:

*laughs* A short chapter though good... I can hardly wait for the next instalment... :pinkiehappy:

3833391
Short for you. it took me 4-5 hours to write this. (trying to piece bits together main reason.)

3834084 Ah! Yeah I can see that... It takes a lot of time and energy to wright stories I know that all to well... :pinkiehappy: You are doing a wonderful job though so don't stop anytime soon :pinkiehappy:

3835796
just to spite you I will release next chapter in 10 years. :trollestia:

3836181 *Sniff* Y-You'll make Fluttershy cry! :fluttercry: And then me in turn.....


:fluttershbad:

And I thought you where a good pony.... *sniff*

:)

3837514
I am no pony. For I....AM.....A BURRITO!:pinkiecrazy:

3839067 :pinkiegasp: Well then mister Burrito... I... Am... A CherryChimiChonga!

Or was it a ChimiCherryChonga?
Or maybe a ChongaCherryChimi? I'm gonna have to think about this.

3839450
Gonna have to look it up I guess.

3841585 Maybe Twilight will have a book on it? *I ponder then as I slowly walk away still pondering over the thought.*

3914383
Only child so yea I was hit pretty hard.

3917144 I believe it... I have had my fair share of loss myself, It never gets any better... *sadsmile*

4285252 At this point in time.... no idea. I have the next chapter partially (stressing it a little) worked on.

¿Blueblood como antagonista malcriado? Ohh, que impactante.

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