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You're sitting in your house, checking out Facebook, and trying to decide what to do for the night, when you're disturbed by a glowing dot which turns into an impossible tunnel into a strange land. Do you take the tunnel or run to your shrink psychiatrist?

In honor of the old choose your own adventure stories of my childhood.

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Comments ( 24 )

This is the best kind of story! When people like it despite it being under thousand words each chapter.

I tried to stay in the kitchen. But I still wound up in the tunnel:fluttershbad:

Good story, can't wait for more.

Dude, the wait for your lab coat friends is broken, it just brings you back to the part where he walks into the kitchen.
But on the otherhand, great story. I really like the pick your own adventure thing, even though it all ends up the same. :derpytongue2:

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Thanks for the head's up. I've fixed the link.
Yeah, the start of these stories has to have a certain amount of fate/direction, or the story won't start. There's more room for new things once you're into the adventure proper. :)

:applecry: y u no continue le story? this is epic :twilightsmile:

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Alright, I get it now. But it would be totally funny for it to end abruptly if they just waited, like he gets taken into the asylum, and he kills himself. The End.

But then, after it says "the end", It has a link to the beginning to start it over again.

That would be totes hilar. :rainbowlaugh:

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Thanks so much. :) I'm working on the next parts. :)

For future reference, I recommend getting all the chapters into a story like this. Then hit submit

Comment posted by JustSomeGuy112 deleted Nov 12th, 2013

If this really is a choose your own adventure, I don't think I should start until it's complete. :ajsleepy:

"Look... I... I... Look I'll prove to you it's not there. I'll prove to you that the tunnel is just in my head!"

This is great. "They'll take you to the hospital, but first, they'll try to dump you into the tunnel to ascertain that you're actually crazy"

This 'Choose your own Adventure Story' is really awesome; it's the only one of it's kind here on FIMfiction that is up to quality standard. I'd really love to see more progression put in, but I can understand that life takes us away from accomplishing such things. Though, it will always remain a favorite on this site.

Amnesia! A human turned pony's best friend! I know you haven't updated this is what, 3 years? But please do!

So this is here it's at.. please continue

two options: (1 be honest and come off as insane or (2 lie and seem mostly sane hmmm...

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This is on my mind to update. Hopefully this year. :)

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