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blowngasket


Sanity is overated anyways.

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OK, I don't like humanized pony stories, but I'm glad I read this because I am a total sucker for two people deciding to go to bed together because one of them says, essentially, "Hey, do you wanna go have sex?" and the other says "Sure, why not?" With all the dancing around and crap that usually happens, it's a really nice change for once. :-)

How the fuck this is not featured is beyond me. ALSO WHERE ARE THE COMMENTS? I am alone?! :raritycry:

3470251 Thanks, I think. Never been interested in writing this kind of stuff, but I still value it as one of my original creations.

3470336 Not all to concerned for the feature box. If it makes it, neato. If not, it is because (I would hope) stories with better substance made it in. I guess win win no matter what.

This story is awesome. Really love your discord description, love the characterization, love the sex.
:fluttershyouch:
:rainbowwild:

3472246 thank you very much. I actually went in thinking this wouldn't be well received, being humanized and all. I am glad I am usually wrong. :pinkiehappy:

3472273 I humbly accept your mustaches.

This story has my absolute favorite thing in any form of media,Wit and personality,So often do you just see bland,Unimaginative characters who cant hold your interest for more than a split phentosecond,This however,Had personality,Witty dialogue,And amazing character......I guess depth is the word? Rarely do i find a story with characters i truely enjoy,Hell,The only other story to come to mind is Quantum Castaways (Great fic by the way,Id recommend it).All in all,a absolutely marvelous little piece of work,Ten out of ten Yay's for you,With a extra five moustaches as a tip :yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:




(....The sex was a nice bonus aswell.....Pretty well written by the way)

3476935 Thank you for commenting. I can clearly say I am not all that skilled with writing out sex scenes, or comfortable at it either. Just...kinda weird.

With that out of the way, thank you for the comment. I was kinda nervous, putting this up and all, not wanting it to become popular because it is "just another clopfic" but many of the responses I have gotten are about most everything but. I really appreciate it. I will also check out that fic you recommended. Thanks again for your input.

3477058 Also i just started reading Jokers wild.You seem to be rather good at putting personality and wit in your stories

3477093 I hope you enjoy it, then, and thank you again for the supporting words. :twilightsmile:

3477135 If a person does good,I will say what made it good,If it hasnt been said too much allready,If a person makes Tripe on a bike with no redeeming qualities,Ill do my best to make Ben Yahtzee Croshaw look like a absolute fanboy.I merely give praise where its deserved

Comment posted by Ninjahzzzz deleted Nov 12th, 2013

3477145 That was an...interesting way of putting it, I suppose, but thank you none the less, deserving or not.

3477187 How about we leave any more discussion about that story in it's comments.:raritywink: But to answer your question, it is rude to give out spoilers.

3477205 I went and deleted the comment,Just so it doesnt spoil anyone

Explicit humanized stuff with Discord in it is so hard to find I wonder what the hell is wrong with the fandom sometimes. Cretins, all of us.

You give me some hope back because this is damn fun. Whether it was your cup of tea or not, it's a really fine and enjoyable, fun story. Good job.

3567689 Thanks. It is actually funny that you mention it. Even if I wasn't initially fond of doing something adult, I actually really enjoy this one now that I let the after effect of actually writing it wear off. I can still go back and say "Damn, I actually went through and wrote this, and I like it. Am I going to hell?" :twilightoops:

Thanks for the comment, though, and I am glad you enjoyed it. Have a great day and take it easy :pinkiesmile:

3567744

Glad I was of use, and if it was just by leaving some nice words on this story. I can tell it's your first venture in this kind of thing, because some of the descriptions and the flow of action can use work, but that's nothing more practice won't fix. The strength of this story was definitely the character interaction, and how and natural it all felt. You gave off the impression that the reader sees actual people interact here, not just hot pieces of meat that do the nasty. I think that's what really good porn should do, just like any story - Engage the reader. And two dozens description of how big her tits were just doesn't make that happen.

As said, a few parts were rough, and you should definitely make sure next time that the flow of action is always understandable, but I think you're a pretty fine writer. Especially pursue those character interactions, you know how to make them enjoyable and funny.

“At least my shenanigans are cheeky and fun, while your shenanigans are cruel and tragic, which makes them not shenanigans at all really.”

:rainbowlaugh: Thanks for the super troopers reference.

3570719 I am glad someone got that one. :pinkiehappy:

I'm stunned... this fic is a piece of art if I ever saw one! Not only it features unique pairing, you actually managed to pull off their characters well so they aren't OOC at all. While I usually don't read much clop fiction I can clearly see that you put a lot of work into this and I loved every little bit of it.
Even though humanization isn't my thing most of the time, you did well because the reader doesn't feel it. It's not too pointed out, not 'forced'.
You have earned my like and fav, and I would fav and like it again and again if I could but sadly I can't. Would love to read sequel to this and seeing Chrissy dominating Dissy! :twilightsheepish:

3990154 Thank you very much :twilightblush:

That was really nice. I like human, anthro, ppony everything, as long as it's interesting. And you wrote these two marvelously.

And i always thought that Chryssie and Discord make an awesome pairing.

Cya
Raziel-chan

Evil shenanigans!!!:trollestia:

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