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Damocles23
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That cover art had better not be lying to me.
Sexy as fuck.
Damn good job you did, there.
This was... hilarious!
.
Seriously, it's absolutely beautiful. Not the whole sex part (I'm not really into that kind of thing), but the way you handled it... just beautiful
Okay, from this point on, I knew this wouldn't be a normal read, and I wasn't disappointed at all. Giving Pinkie Pie a cock! There is no pony smiley for that, so: rofl! Just... seriously, it was magnificent. I don't know if that was you intention or not, but for me it was a great way to say:
"fuck it, those are ponies, let's just have fun with it".
And it was fun. Really fun.
You really made a good portrait of Pinkie Pie. This isn't some teenager emo stuff where obvious humans are replaced with ponies. That's Pinkie Pie. She is crazy, she is nut and she is funny as hell.
The only strange note. This felt a little out of town. Too "conventional" maybe.
When I said the spirit of what makes ponies is preserved there. You transformed what was could have been just to living being fucking together into something truly epic. I laughed so hard.
It's Pinkie Pie, don't ask
. So great. The most epic fuck I've ever seen. That should be a movie. I would watch that! (instead of all the crap they give us. This is true comedy.)
And in the middle, you put that. I'm at loss of words to tell you how great that was. I felt like Pinkie was about to kill Viktor. Which made the following just so much better.
"What if I got me pregnant?"
That's a killer. So wonderful. And once again, it wouldn't work with humans, but it's so totally normal for ponies.
SO... FUCKING... EPIC !!!!
This was great. This was wonderful. This deserves to be known. I don't know if other do stuff like that too (this is the second "pony sex stuff" I read), but I hope they do. Just the same way "ask molestia" uses comedy to talk about sex (well, mostly just to have fun), you put comedy and fun in what is usually boring or just bad litterature.
Loved it. Still against cloping (because ponies look way too young...), but that's just a great story altogether!
***
In fact, I read the other story about sex not so long ago and there are several traps you didn't fall into:
- you didn't give ponies breasts (at least I didn't see any), showing that the ponies are in fact humans
- you exploited the fact you had ponies, and not just talked about humans
- you didn't gave us some serious crap when speaking about a very fun and cartoony universe.
***
Only one detail:
I think you wanted to make that repetition as a figure of style. But it bothered me when reading it. I think it lacks a third "a crazy idea crosses my brain" to make it complete (because we think by three). Just like that, it was only a repetition I read and not something that made sense.
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God that was great and epic. Never thought a story mixing sex and ponies could achieve anything good, and certainly that great.
But if that show ever taught me something (that I already knew, but... oh well), it was to keep an open mind.
And you didn't disappoint.
Thanks! You made my day.
SO... EPIC !!!! (and fun ^^)
Not the best and not the worst... maybe the weirdest... except that slendy man one... THAT was pretty weird.
Still, a good read and all, lot's of funny. Just imagine this
coming at you.
Why does she berate him for maybe getting her pregnant? It went up her plot. Or is this just pinkie crazy?
Also, it says futa but doesn't mention the second set of genitalia, is she shemale or futa?
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Oh my...Thank you for enjoying it so much. It's always nice seeing someone to give such an thorough comment for my work. I wasn't aware of that repetition and probably I missed it during the whole 'now let's check the fic for a fourth time to find any mistake.' The fact is I took a long break from writing it and I probably forgot about it when I wrote the next part.
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Thank you for having made something so awesome from the subject at hand.
>auto penetration
now that's a new one....
Its well written and a good idea, i read about 3/4 of the way through. But what got to me the most was the dogy black griffon oc. Try making a couple stories with canon charicters and i bet you will make a pretty damn good author.
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It was a request and the OC was part of the request.
Usually I don't write them.
Anything involving Pinkie Pie is always great!
I rate it 10/10 but why such title?
The title confused me that this story will contain some arguments between ponies, or sadness because one pony doesn't really care if other is around.... but nothing like that happened in it..... Both ponies enjoy being together so actually it DOES matter if they are together because that makes them happy....... am I misunderstanding something or what?
i think i found the gay bath house.....
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3497010 I think it means something along the lines of "things don't bother me if I'm with you".
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Yes, exactly.
Sorry if I haven't cleared the matter for you but this is the meaning.