The mystery child found only with a amulet and a blanket where will his life lead only time will tell what fate he will lead.
The mystery child found only with a amulet and a blanket where will his life lead only time will tell what fate he will lead.
And it goes on. You know, there're these things called 'period', 'semi-colon', 'run-on sentence', and 'comma splices', as well as 'repetitive words'. Sorry if my review is not too detailed; I'm not in the mood to play good guy, bad guy thing... sorry...
http://www.fimfiction.net/group/27/the-proofreader-group it sounds like a good story but, it need a lot of work, this should help you out. also is it a boy or girl because you mentioned filly that the girl while also referring as a he.
3464313 its fine i really need someone to help me anyway so im fine with it
3464415 yeah i fixed that