Remember back when you were a teenager? What dreams did you have? Did you ever wanna grow up to be famous, beloved and remebered, and were you willing to rebel as much as possible just to see that dream become a reality? This is a story about two friends who get separated by fate, who shared a similar dream, but later learned that life had other plans for them. This is a story about two dreamers: a rockstar who's career has been destroyed named Lewis Walker and a beautiful cellist who never got to go anywhere named Octavia "Melody" Brandis.
[Note: The Story switches between linear narrative and non-linear narrative]
Chapters (12)
Someone liked of so much they turned there computer upside down and thought it was the like button
One more thing sequel pretty please
Sees title...instantly thinks of recent Bon Jovi song.
I've finally found my way! Say goodbye to yesterday! Hit the gas, there ain' no breaks on the Lost Highway!
3577999 ironcally exactly thats where i got the idea for the title.
3576980 i'd love to make a sequel to this, but i really dont know how to continue this story any further. If you want, you can leave suggestions as to what you would Love to see in a possible sequel. But as of now, i cant make any promises as to wether a sequel will happen or not
This is the best love story I have read. EVER. Very touching and I couldn't put it down. I loved it so much! I even squealed at the end. It is my favorite story. All the props go to you my friend.
This story was awesome. I loved it.
It was very sweet and beautiful. 
great job dude.
*-Raven Talon
3579014tht would be much appreciated
I enjoyed this. The critique comes first.
There were a few contradictions in the plot points, namely that Octavia mentions she thought Lewis already knew about his mother, then in later chapters he gets angry over her not telling him about it all. There were also an awful lot of cliches that, at times, made the characters feel a little bit Mary Sue. I'd also like to mention that the style and formatting were somewhat off-putting, but that is entirely personal preference, so you may want to disregard that point. The usual grammatical issues that we all face; you're replacing your, and so on. Nothing too big.
All things considered, I think you've done rather well here. Your writing style is easy to follow. Your characterisation and dialogue, for the most part, feel quite natural. The whole thing flows, which I commend, because nothing irks more than a story that feels like it's stop-start, and the author has to force the plotline forwards.
And, unlike a lot of stories, it actually hits all of its tags!
Thank you for writing this.
alright so i love this story aside from some poor word choice and spelling errors here and there, there really isnt much to complain about that being said put a trigger warning somwhere for the cutting and child abuse either at the start of the apropriate chapter or preferably in the description. im begging you man that shit snuck up on me fierce.
This is the first humanised pony story that I can say that I like. No scratch that, I fucking loved this.
3640581 thank you that means alot. ive been trying to get people to critique my story but i had no success, plus i lost any motivation to keep writing and im hoping to get it all back. read my blog if u want the full scoop
HUGS are awesome.
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I'm going to advertise this every where on Fimfiction that I can, this needs more people to read this.
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I have a critique...
In some points your story is hard to tell when there is a flashback and present time. One example of this is when Lewis is at his mothers grave stone, there are back to back flashbacks and its hard to tell when they start and when they stop.
I'd also like to mention that the style and formatting were somewhat off-putting, but that's just me.
That's all I have to say, other than that the story was great!
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