• Member Since 19th Dec, 2011
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Okay... stay calm. Take deep breaths. No need to start panicking.


Let's see.... Twilight's Emergency Checklist for Temporal Displacement:

Inexplicably hurled into the past? Check.

Trapped in an unfamiliar and unrecognizable body? Check

No idea where to turn for help or answers? Check

Recommended action: Panic


Well, the list knows best!

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 25 )

Intriguing, tracked and ready to read.

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That was good.
:yay:

And then everything was a nightmare in a nigthmare.

This is really interesting, but pretty confusing. Two Spikes? That part was a little hard to keep track of. Still, I'll track this.

Interesting. Two Spikes, one of whom is a pony. And a few mysteries scattered throughout as well. I'll follow.

A bit of a mind twirl, but rather good once you get the hang of the story. I always did enjoy a a reality bender that didn't involve humans. Keep it up!

+1 for the Star Trek Reference

Looks like this is a riveting story in the making.

Well, It's about damn time! :trixieshiftleft:

hope it wont take another month for next chapter.... I had forgotten I had this story in my tracked list and for a few minutes I was trying to remember what happened previously....

Man, if the rest of the strory is going to be like this, it probably deserves a [Dark] tag.

Damn
That was badass

how long till the next update?:applejackunsure: i usually wait months for updates on good stories:applecry:

Spike just can't catch a break. Can't wait for Chapter 4

from celestias description it sounded like twilight was being raped to death. wtf?. spikes gonna have hell to pay. hell.to.pay. I pity that fool.:facehoof:

Spike's about to learn the meaning of "corporal punishment"

Broken Record indeed. A fascinating story.

(One thing, though: Spike's blood is green. You can see it in the chicken-scratches in Owl's Well That Ends Well.)

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Huh, good point. Must've slipped my mind. Will have to alter that. Thanks for letting me know!

Just an addendum, in theory, time travel is impossible in physics for a living (esistem many complications), but nothing distitui the journey of consciousness, or the individual ego if you prefer. While ever there should be a body to occupy, this must have similarities to the original. It was probably a way to enhance the Twilight spell of time. What can lead us, now the owner of the body that occupies Spike is in your body for giving a voyeur with Twilight: the fourth ... in the bathroom ... embracing ... clop!:moustache:

Help Spike! HELP! This is insane! Spike is hurt more and more! Come on !:pinkiesad2:

Uuuupdaaaate! :rainbowderp:

1717908 Spike's blood is green?

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In "Owl's Well That Ends Well," after Spike fights the chicken, he has both green and grey scratches on his scales. I presume the green scratches are his blood.

Sheesh, been a long awhile, hope this story is revived soon.

Dunno what brought me back here...

Oh well.

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