This story is a sequel to Discord is Bored
After the incident that happened a few months ago, Discord is now allowed to cause mild chaos in Canterlot castle, so long as he changes it back. But when Discord does something horrible on Nightmare Night, Discord gets punished in the most horrible way possible... he gets turned into a pony.
An "and" should go between "room" and "bowed." ...I phrased that awkwardly.
She heard a big change in her body? You may need the word "felt" between "and" and "a." ...Another awkwardly phrased sentence...
I think his/her Rule 63 name is "Gleaming Shield."
This phrase sounds odd to me.
There should be a comma between "sighed" and "contentedly."
What?
Celestia and Luna are not able to use the Elements anymore because they have chosen new bearers in the Twilight and her friends. Aside from that minor detail, this was another cute, funny story.
Ummm, ponies write with quills like old-timey peeps and harry potter wizards. Did you mean pins or, for some reason I just randomly thought, pills
3466699 Argh! Why do I keep making spelling errors!? AHGHGH- *explodes*
Thanks
3466809 I changed it to quills
please stop making these as one shots, they would work better as 1 full story.
Favoriting...*continues reading*
3469987 i agree
3469987 Or at the very least, lengthy one shots. These feel way too short.
3678067 yeah
that.
It's a nice little one-shot, but I feel as if it could have been better. Also, the description and the picture had pony Discord, yet the actual story had him only appear for a very brief moment... Why mention something that is barely apart of the story?
3723565 I'm going to extend it soon, so hold you're 'horses'! Heh, see what I did there...? *sigh* My jokes suck...
3725481
*Polite laugh* It was good.
Ohhhhhh...
SHET!
Have a like! and fav!
3840767 Haha, thanks. Be sure to read it's prequel too.
3841349 Yup! and uh... Is his cutie mark a golden apple?
If so... Anyone have the feeling of Zerum right now?
3841357 I... Don't know what that is. I found the pic on Google. Also, reply in a PM, we don't want to spam the story.
He heard the crowd laughing and felt quills hit his fur.
Are the quills the wings?
The ending was the theme of the story at it was only a paragraph long. Why?