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DaRandomPony


I make dark fics, and also comdey, though not as well. Although, people do like Discord is Bored, so I guess I'm good at it. Dark is what I do better, though.

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This story is a sequel to Discord is Bored



After the incident that happened a few months ago, Discord is now allowed to cause mild chaos in Canterlot castle, so long as he changes it back. But when Discord does something horrible on Nightmare Night, Discord gets punished in the most horrible way possible... he gets turned into a pony.

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A unicorn guard stepped into the room bowed.

An "and" should go between "room" and "bowed." ...I phrased that awkwardly.:rainbowderp:

She could then hear Discord snap his fingers, and a big change in her body.

She heard a big change in her body? You may need the word "felt" between "and" and "a." ...Another awkwardly phrased sentence...:rainbowhuh:

Princess Glimmer Shield, I obey thee with all my heart!”

I think his/her Rule 63 name is "Gleaming Shield."

Discord snapped his bird hand, and a great cloud of smoke enveloped the room.

This phrase sounds odd to me.

Discord sighed contentedly.

There should be a comma between "sighed" and "contentedly."

He heard the crowd laughing and felt pens hit his fur.

What?:trixieshiftright:

Celestia and Luna are not able to use the Elements anymore because they have chosen new bearers in the Twilight and her friends. Aside from that minor detail, this was another cute, funny story.:twilightsmile:

Ummm, ponies write with quills like old-timey peeps and harry potter wizards. Did you mean pins or, for some reason I just randomly thought, pills

3466699 Argh! Why do I keep making spelling errors!? :flutterrage: AHGHGH- *explodes*

Thanks :pinkiesmile:

3466809 I changed it to quills :twilightsmile:

please stop making these as one shots, they would work better as 1 full story.

Favoriting...*continues reading*

3469987 Or at the very least, lengthy one shots. These feel way too short.

It's a nice little one-shot, but I feel as if it could have been better. Also, the description and the picture had pony Discord, yet the actual story had him only appear for a very brief moment... Why mention something that is barely apart of the story?

3723565 I'm going to extend it soon, so hold you're 'horses'! Heh, see what I did there...? :ajsmug: *sigh* My jokes suck... :ajsleepy:

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*Polite laugh* It was good. :twilightsmile:

Ohhhhhh...

SHET!

Have a like! and fav!

3840767 Haha, thanks. Be sure to read it's prequel too. :twilightsmile:

3841349 Yup! and uh... Is his cutie mark a golden apple?

If so... Anyone have the feeling of Zerum right now?

3841357 I... Don't know what that is. I found the pic on Google. Also, reply in a PM, we don't want to spam the story. :twilightsheepish:

He heard the crowd laughing and felt quills hit his fur.

Are the quills the wings?

The ending was the theme of the story at it was only a paragraph long. Why?

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