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Emerald Burst


( A collaboration between Cookietheif and I) It started with a knock on Emerald Burst's front door. The unicorn before him was lost and in poor condition. So he decided to let him stay for a while. But the unicorn's past came with him...

In an effort to erase the past, they go to see Celestia but she was in a meeting with Luna about a certain goal... To divide the world where they'll rule one half of each.

As the true heir to the Equestrian throne surfaces, they must journey to distant lands and raise an army to fight against the "royal" might of the two sisters... Will they succeed or die trying?

Chapters (4)
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Comments ( 8 )


Well, you've peaked my interest.
A Fav and like!
Can't wait to see where this goes!

Next chapter will be posted soon~ :scootangel: I promise!

As long as i can get some time to write it out during the weekend :trixieshiftleft: :trixieshiftright: if i don't i'm going to punch somepony :flutterrage: Emerald and I have such limited time to work on it!

:twilightblush: Well i'm basicly done writing it with Emerald... All thats left to do is type it!

Sadly the action or adventure isn't going to be on it. Buuuut we did add some fun little parts.

The real goods will be soon though! :raritystarry:

MIster Cookietheif here meant that we were done writing Chapter two. Not the whole story. Just a little bit of clarification for you all. :yay:

Hope you ponies enjoy reading it as much as we did making it! :pinkiehappy:

I would say something like "Expect another chapter soon!" Buuut... I got a special story of mine that I need to finish. :pinkiegasp: My very first story, and my best one. The Crimson Smile is now on my "Must finish now" list. sorry everypony. :fluttercry:

Anyways, tell us what you think so far! Comments are always good to see!

Sorry we took so bucking long :facehoof: Writing this, and my grimdark, and having other things such as the most simplist distractions were killing us. I'll have the next chapter typed, proofread by Emerald, and it'll posted around next week.

Get ready for some awsomeness, folks. :yay:

Questions anypony? :twilightsmile: We'd love to hear them, although I won't personally be able to answer then due to a lack of internet where I live. But Emerald will be around to answer!

Give us some tips or point out any errors, help us make the story improve if you think it needs to be. Obviously some do if we got dislikes.

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