• Member Since 2nd Jan, 2013
  • offline last seen Oct 25th, 2017

Lord Erhswin Wholewheat


The Goddamn Worm Master Supreme!

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A boy with amnesia suddenly ends up in Equestria. Adopting the name Dream Runner he has adventures with the mane 6.


AwkwardTaco:The guy who literally wrote the whole story while I wrote 2 sentences.
ChaseCosmicwing:Did editing and a few paragraphs

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 22 )

I'm sorry, but the cliché is strong with this one.

3471903 Then you've not gotten to the end, my fair stallion.

3471903 You, sir, assume much.

3471909 I was a part of this. Just give it a chance. Come on.

3471927 I'm too busy reading something else :moustache:

3471912>>3471907 no no guys HE's compLetely Precise with this assessMEnt.

3471933 I guess. I mean, I don't know. I suppose I just want them to give it a chance, ya know? Cliches aren't like a kiss of death, and we worked hard on this.

Was his human name Gary?

3472161 The world may never know.

3472161 It's a bit too late to figure out now.

3471903 Aww... but this story packs a few feels, if you managed to pass all those things a usual HiE story has.

Nice end, better part of the story.

Is the wall of text done on purpose ?

3471944
They aren't the kiss of death, but they certainly aren't the elixir of life.

3471933 "help me"? why would i help you, when it is more fun to see you tortured with the feather duster?

That was beautiful.

:moustache:

3472776 Agreed. I really can't argue on that one.

Nicely done My Lord of Bread. Truly this is a story for the ages.

3474041 too bad it's not as popular as we envisioned. Guess most people get turned off by this to the point that they quit before they see the ending. Ah well at least you and others seemed to enjoy it.




and I got a follower from it so all's well in the end for the overlord of grain.

I like stories like this. They lull you into a false sense of complacency, then bushwhack you with a mind-bending plot twist.

3474635
Most people don't "get" it and they're more interested in fluffy happy time stories than something that's actually saying something.

And you're still on the positive side of the ratings so that's good.

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