A strange colt is born in a town on the outscurts of Ponyville. After a shocking discovery of an unuasal talent, he is riticualed and praticly outcasted by everypony, but his parents. He then meets the main cast and the fun begins!!!!!1!!!
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WOW THIS AUTHORS SO COOL!:
YOU SHOULD TOTALLY READ MORE!
3457286 quite the convincing argument you got there.
This story is so bad I can't not believe it's deliberately trying to be terrible.
Or is it?
Ok, the pacing of this is a bit bad I think. I think you should save the story of the village until later and have a large emotional moment. Because with that, not only does it make your OC look emotionless, and also makes Rainbow Dash look like an intolerant asshole. But, you are free to continue. I hope that this story is good later on.
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I'm pretty sure it's written like this on purpose. Still doesn't answer whether or not the author is trolling or just inept.
Lazy troll 4/10. Misspellings and a Gary Sue? No imagination whatsoever.
Hey it might not be the best but its a pretty good story from the first two chapters give him constructive criticism don't jest shoot it down most likely he has a plan. To righter good so far but jest maybe add some of the other characters.
Well I like it!!!
Thanks guys for the "constructive help". To answer you guys, my OC is designed to seem emotionless at the time in question (the FlutterShy gets him to open up), and as towards Rainbow acting like an a-hole, she does that so shes more like Ying (chaos). Any other questions?
You substituted the second half of Rainbow Dashs name for the second half of Applejack's here.
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