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Getting caught in the rain, Emerald tries to take shelter under a shop's overhang, however the shop's owner is having nothing of it and invites him inside. Will he be able to survive the night alone with his best friend; the one he has a crush on?

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Very cute! I don't find myself reading too many Colgate/Minuette stories, but I'm glad I gave this one a shot.

But man, if there's one cliche I just cannot understand, it's when the characters have been in other relationships in the past, but still end up going
"I've loved you since X."
"Oh, but I've been in love with you since Y!"

Not that it's a huge deal breaker or anything, but it just feels so silly to me. If they truly felt that way for so long, why not give it a shot back then? Surely one or both could pick up on some of the signs the other was giving off and at least make an attempt.

Nevertheless, I enjoyed it very much. Have a good day!

3450181 Why did I add that bit of cliche? Well, it simply sounded good. That's about it. Anyways, thank you for reading my story and i'm glad you liked it. :twilightsmile:

I liked this, it was cute and adorable.

One little thing though, a small typo. right here.

“Showoff,” I said under my breath. I took my fork in hoof, and dug into my somewhat warm mac and cheese. It wasn't the best mac and cheese but it's free food so I couldn't complain complain.

I'm sure it's only supposed to be one 'complain' not two.

That ending too though

“Hey, Colgate?”


“If I brought you a maid's outfit, would you wear it?”

I let out an “Oof!” when she elbowed me in the stomach. Celestia I love this mare, but she hits hard.

Made me laugh something good:rainbowlaugh:

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