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John 117

"I am the master of my fate; I am the captain of my soul"


It has been 2 years since the events at Baltimare. Marcus 657 is now living peacefully with his wife Fluttershy and his son Star Chaser. But unforeseen events in the Gryphon empire and an old friend that was thought lost has brought Marcus to
determine whether or not letting go of his old life is best for his family, and the world he now lives in.
(it is recommended that you read Marcus 657, the first of these two stories, to understand the setting and characters better)

Big Thanks to Gunner59524 for helping with the name of this story!

Featured 8/22/015. Holy Crap guys!

117 likes.....8/22/15...the name sake lives on.

Chapters (14)
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Comments ( 102 )

Devin the dude would have been a better name.

3447753 maybe....but it didn't seem like a pony name

AWWWWWW, That little foal is so cuuuute :rainbowkiss: Can I hug Star Chaser pweaaase? :twilightsmile:

this is a good story and good job to you
:twilightsheepish: but i do have to ask can you help me with my story i need a editor and proofreader can you help?:twilightblush::twilightblush:

3451694 of course!:pinkiegasp: PM the chapters and I can do what I can :twilightsmile:

3451892 thats the thing i just sent you everything :twilightsheepish: it should be on you're email

The very first chapter and i'm already excited about this story! Can't wait to see more.

gassing up at the stars

this is the funniest typo i've seen here

Dude...you will get way more views if you link to this story in the last chapter of the prequel.


....why do i not think of these things.:rainbowderp:


I don't know, but even better, you could whip up a mini chapter showing a quick titbit of his life in between so that the story 'updates' and put the link in there so that everyone who faved the story knows.

Oh. And did i mention the other thing? No? ok then.

MOAR!! :flutterrage:

And work on the grammar a bit.

very good story. can't wait to read more

Read both of Marcus' stories and let me just say: Damn, you're a fine writer. However, more chapters would always be nice if you feel like it. :pinkiehappy:

3623140 Will do! i just put out another chapter for another story, so i will be able to is one now :twilightsmile:

3600268 also, just so you know...i am a guy, so it would be "monsieur":moustache::twilightsmile:

aww i wanted to see what would happen with the bats....
i want to see his reactions.

3807509 He'd probably swear a lot and wanted to punch, er...:facehoof: buck Applejack :twilightsheepish:


I actually had that as a chapter idea, but thought it unimportant towards the plot (ehe); and yes, that actually was the reaction i had planned....:moustache::trollestia:

3807979 so what's next? Is Marcus gonna compete in the Equestria Games? Sounds a bit unfair cuz he's a spartan, although he doesn't have his augmentations anymore which doesn't give him the speed he used to have back in the ol' soldier days


No...something....different. I try to follow the cannon show as best as possible, but it will have a different plot line.

3808356 alrighty thewhoaaaw, that was quick for you to react.


I have FimFiction open 24/7

and im on my laptop about that amount of time.....:twilightblush:


Dont remember...I found it on Deviantart :twilightblush:

3808399 Wish I could find a nice pic, but i can't find one...:fluttercry:


Deviantart is a great place to find them!

3808427 I know, but I can't find one that looks like this but then in pony version (but not in a mincraft like way, just drawn)fbcdn-sphotos-b-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-frc3/1374791_1757460847726538_1934666652_n.jpg


Ah, well, specifics can be hard, but if you look long enough it can pay off. But you may not find hwat you were looking for, but something way better.

3808454 maybe I won't, but I'll find it. And when I do, I'll have an awesome pic. :pinkiehappy:

3808493 thanks. BTW have you ever seen phoenix wright: turnabout storm?


the guy who made this project uploaded the first part 2 year ago. And he finished it 2 months ago

3808535 well, I'll be going, have a good day.

P.S. Have a couple of :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

Daaaaaamn, poor bastard. I know he is a spartan the best of the best and etc, but this just sheesh. Every father's lifes, this is the most worst part. When your own son didn't recognize you. And dunno why, maybe the randomness but my name is Marcus too. So this stuff just hurt me a lot. Poor guy, i feel now the sympathy. Damn, c'mon everybody or pony just pat his back. He really need this now. No, no one? Gee, what friends are you guys? I hope DR. Evil give it ya all buddy.

Well that was... unexpected... Does he turn back into a pony in the end?

Twilight was talking to Twilight:rainbowhuh:

I didn't know that there was 2 Twilight's in this story :facehoof:

This fic is awesome so far, aside from a few spelling errors.

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