I do have one question... they say that's their auntie.... but she keeps talking about her damn fool son, so wouldn't that be their grandma or am i reading it wrong.

Either way cant wait for more!

3439080 She prefers to be called "Auntie" Because "Grandma" makes her feel old.

For a moment, Octavia couldn’t process that. Then the realization hit her hard, and she felt a lump drop itself hard into her throat. Arpeggio - My little Arpeggio - working as a prostitute? Octavia was not so naive to the ways of the world to think that everypony ended up in a perfect career for themselves. Life could throw a lot at a pony - and sometimes, it overwhelmed everything else. Equestria was not the idyllic paradise it was often painted as - there were always those who would fall between the cracks of society as a whole… but this, this she did not expect.

Tavia´s reaction to Vinyl´s past as Two Notes and the darkest aspect of Equestria perfectly mirrors Celestia´s one in the Code of Harmony.

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Ahh ok makes perfect sense

I'm confused. Vinyl and Octavia grew up in Ponyville?

While it makes sense... this aspect of the story scares me.

And looking forwards to seeing if their parents are the first to throw stones in this family's glass house...

3439839 No- In Musical Relations, it was explained that Vinyl had been sent to Ponyville after being ejected from the Canterlot Orchestra to await pickup by her parents.

3439875 I seem to have forgotten that.

Probably already mention but there is some inconsistencies when Scratch and Tavi run into Charity and Eleonore;
dark-blue coated earth pony strode out of the crowd

Next paragraph;
The older unicorn hugged her right back

Aslo, in the same scene, what is 'pell mell'?

Can't wait for the next parts :)

Oh wow.... just wow. I am at a loss for words.

3442555 From: http://www.thefreedictionary.com/pell-mell

1. In a jumbled, confused manner; helter-skelter.
2. In frantic disorderly haste; headlong:

Looking good so far, my only issue is in the narration you keep switching between referring to her as Octavia, Tavia, and Tavi. I'm guessing each version has a different connotation and a different reason for being used but so far it seems kind of random. If that isn't the case I'd suggest settling on just one, at least for the narration.

3443291 Ahh, Thanks mate.

I love this story. Please keep writing.:pinkiehappy

sweet, another sequel! i love this!

I had been waiting for this story to continue.. and never realized it continued in a different section like this. but ohhh how I missed reading it. :D

...I laughed my ass off. *Thumbs up*

Elnore Rigby.
Picks up the rice in the church where a wedding has been.
Lives in a dream.
Waits at the window
Wearing a face that she keeps in a jar by the door
Who is it for?
All the lonely ponies
Where do they all come from?
All the lonely ponies
Where do they all belong?

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Yes it does indeed now. And she smokes a pipe?

Lovely chapter so far.

FINISH IT

please?

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Last chapter is about a third done right now. Going to try and finish it by work time tonight.

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that made my night. big fan of this series so far, and im gald to see this hole in the story being filled.

Commence read.

Alright. More background information.

Interesting insights.