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After Nightmare Moon was purged from Luna's body, it left her completely and utterly weak. Struggling to perform even the most basic of spells, she has been spending a lot of time in her quarters trying to regain her strength, but recently she's been dealing with horrifying nightmares that assuage her night after night, each worst than the last.

After a particularly bad nightmare, Luna starts to lose hold of what is real and what is fake, and it is up to her caring and loving sister to help her through her ordeal.

Contains: Diapers

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 51 )

so far, I am seeing a relationship that will go further than any I have seen, as I have had some this bad and no one would actually come to me with comfort, but I still manage to show the love and care that I can with my heart, even if it is seen as transparent, it is still there, but I have not received as much as I have tried to give the only one that shows nearly close to this, is my mother, but even though I never was comforted after a terrible dream, I still forgive them

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not diapers.

NAOW

Finally, some nice Celestia fanfiction.

I was getting bored with all the dark stuff, so let's see some more motherly Celly :pinkiehappy:

Contains: Diapers
*Backs off slowly*

3436939 3437537 Well if you guys don't like the content then why are you here? No one is forcing you to watch this story or read it. You are doing so at your own risk. :eeyup:

3437020 That's exactly what this is going to be. :twilightblush:

3437750 Because this particular story is being written as a collab for a contest. :pinkiehappy:

Sound interesting. There are really not much good story with one of the Princess Sisters in Diapers. Maybe this will be one. I look forward to more.

Seems like today was a good day for submissions to the group. Never had two new users submit something actually worth reading in the same day (and possibly not even the same month). Colour me interested.

i thought surely it must be a dream. Poor Luna i can only imagine the horror of that dream.:fluttercry: Forgiveness lives in everypony.

ho man , that was VERY difficult to read through those intro scenes , if this wasn't going to turn into a very heartwarmy feely fic i would have been quite enraged probably or something.....

Contains: Diapers

...dammit. :pinkiesick:

*wanders on*

3438666 That part doesn't come in till the next chapter, but what's here can literally be its own story, so please, don't let the warning stop you from reading this.

3438096 What was the other? Conflicted's one?

3438202 The first part is exactly that: a dream, and a bad one at that.

3440119 Darn hormones :fluttercry:

I really like how this story starts off, its very well written.
I have no doubt this will be a good story

Hrm. On the one hand this is an awesome beginning to what looks to be a good story. On the other... nappies.
There is something wrong there. Nappies should have no place in this fic.
Certainly, if a person wets the bed, it makes sense to have them wear a nappy.
But forcing her to wear a nappy would surely merely inflict further torment upon her poor baby sister.
Would it not be better to have the household staff merely change the bedding? Hell, they're the Royal Sisters, they could probably buy a new _bed_ every night, and it wouldn't inflict any hardship upon them. And the hardship it inflicts upon the household staff? Well, a) that's kind've their job, and b) what's more important, saving the hired help some work, or your dear sister's mental well-being?
I would also say something about it being less likely to cause a scandal, but, well, tabloids. I'm not sure there is any new beyond their powers of hype.

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I should mention that there are two of us collaborating on this story. To me, it seems that your issue with the forthcoming inclusion is that you fear Luna will be forced into this situation. That is simply not the case, and in fact, it is very contrary to the moral of this story. The inclusion of this element invokes a theme which many other stories like it share. That is the value of trust and the feeling of security and safety that it can bring. Celestia’s goal in the beginning is to bring her sister to the point where she can think logically, without being completely overtaken by this mindless fear. When she succeeds in this, her next goal is to show Luna that she can be trusted. But trust is not something that is earned, for if it was earned it would not be true trust, but rather cashing in on the low probability of betrayal. Instead she has to get Luna to relent just a little first, to give Celestia a chance to show that she can be trusted. In the introduction of these, Luna gives up just a little control willingly and consciously because she trusts her sister. In this moment, Luna realizes that her sister’s care is not a prison, but a safe haven. And in that safe haven, she can reconsolidate and rebuild into the mighty and fearsome alicorn she once was. I could write for ages on this matter, and there is much left unsaid, but I will let the completed story speak for itself.

3437706 I don't know if you realised or not, but I was making fun of it saying it contained diapers. It's really a good story.

3441208 Probably should've said that in the first comment so people didn't get the wrong idea. :twilightoops:

Can't wait for nxt chapter.

Green and violet... Sombra? Wait, art thou jesting that the King of Shadows is what haunts and tortures the Princess of the Nights feverish dreams?

I rather enjoy this caring dynamic Celestia has. :twilightsmile:

Good story, I can't wait for the next one. Also, is it just me or is this picture really touching.

There is nothing that needs to said. This is beautiful. :heart:

:heart::heart::heart:

Very nice. Hope Luna recovers well!

...Fine. I guess that was kinda cute.

The diaper felt a little too abrupt. A sheet change to something less fancy would have been fitting, and if/when she had another accident it would be justified. Reading through your replies shows me why you chose to do this, but it still doesn't really tackle the problem of how the diaper's inclusion is logical.

Does this mark the end of the story, or is there yet more to be added? While it reads like a conclusion, it does not feel particularly definitive.

shoulda gone cookies then diaper. but overall i sympathize with Luna's mental state. I remember how out of it i was after being admitted into hospital in 2009 for a blood clot. I hadn't been able to sleep a wink in four weeks by that time and that proves that without sleep you truly do lose our mind and cant distinguish reality from fantasy.

Prior to hospital when i tried to sleep my breathing would stop and shock me awake instantly, i have scoliosis and it is what has caused my breathing and heart issues. in hospital i started using a bpap and eventually blood thinners and diuretic but my first week was hardest. My memory was in and out. My younger bro was with me the first 2 days or so and my mind was so out of it i thought my fate had been switched with his. I was severely burned when i was 10 and now im an amputee and i started crying when i thought i saw his amputated leg hanging off the edge of the bed. i even checked my own limbs as he came over to ask what was wrong and showed me his leg. I even asked if Obama was still president.

He eventually had to go home because his wedding was in a few weeks. in the meantime i thought i was dying and they were trying to let me go and that my brother couldnt handle me dying. i was hallucinating, caption on tv appeared messed up, lost track of time, etc. I wet the bed for first time in ages cuz i was half dreaming nurse came in and was helping me go. i even had a dream i thought i was a ww2 soldier who lost his legs. The wierdest probably was when i was dreaming my mind was connected to internet while my eyes were actually open staring at the ceiling and i couldnt get out and started crying.

in all my time in hospital over the years never had an experience like that. Just goes to show you how out of it you can really get. Oxygen deprivation and insane severe lack of sleep is a bad combination. And i felt more at ease when my brother was there, so i sympathize with Luna and Celestia cept in my case im the older sibling. :trollestia:

While I rather enjoyed this story the ending seemed far too abrupt. And the diapering... Wouldn't a change of sheets be more appropriate? If the accidents continued then the diapers would have been a good choice.

Really? Some sheets are more valuable for Celestia then her for a thousand years lost sister?
Embarrassment is a really needed addition to already cramped mental state of Luna, for sure...
Except diaper part very good story though.

"Luna gives up just a little control willingly and consciously because she trusts her sister."
this line is the problem right there , you presented no reason for this to occur , in fact you made it so reason for the opposite would be the case with
"“But sister, that time has passed. I don’t need to wear diapers; I never have since I was a foal!”"
"One part of her told her that this was so unheard of, and she wanted to reject it. She was a princess after all."

also using possible mess making as a driver for the inclusion of this realllly doesn't hold up when in the adjacent paragraph you include "Enlarging it with her magic so that it would fit an adult mare,"......

Finally a good story of how luna would have been exsept may e the diaper but that arguable the point is that fear or celestia was well done. And this is for u /)

This can either go very very cute or very very bad.

Oh my god there needs to be more, this was such a cute story, and I love the thought of Luna with her big sister. I love the thought of her still being haunted by such things, and the fact that Celestia is so caring only reflects the heart a big sister should have towards their sister.

Excellent story! I almost skipped it due to the diaper warning, but I'm glad I didn't.

I cri erveytim:raritycry::raritycry:

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It is Celestia using dark magic (what Sombra used).

I can understand lunas fears and being helpless against them. she is in a very vulnerable position as this transition takes place. it sounds like shes living in a nightmare, and is totally afraid of everything. it looks like shes taking some vital steps though. I think shell be fine, with her sisters help.

I would love to see someone do this on youtube. It is just so cute !!!

The first chapter was great, but the second just felt too abrupt.

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