After a small vacation to the coastal city of Withersdale, Twilight Sparkle uses a spell to expedite the return trip for her and her friends. However, despite the more or less successful outcome, upon arriving in Ponyville, the Mane Six realize that something is seriously wrong. Can Twilight and the others find out what's happening and fix it before things get even worse, or will they fall prey to the world that's steadily falling apart around them?
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MOAR PLEASE! seriously, though, great fic so far! can't wait for the next chapter!
MOAR PLEASE! seriously, though, great fic so far! can't wait for the next chapter!
I really want to know what's going on/
13200 The title is understandable if you overthink it. XD I've already had one person figure it out. I'll title drop eventually, though and then everyone will groan. Also, delayed response is delayed.
262650 In good time. (Maybe more than intended, but in good time.)
a cold day in hell
1791860 Indeed. Or a cold night, perhaps.
Intriguing story...
Tracking...
Curious to see how many layers of reality they end up going through, and how each will manifest.
I can't wait for the technical explanation as to what actually occurred.
Did the long wavelength teleport somehow refract their entry into reality...
WHO KNOWS!!!
Oh FUCK.
It's like bloody Silent Hill, only with a generous dose of Slenderman.
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There will be a scientific explanation given, I assure you. It's just going to take it a while to get there.
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Definitely a little Silent Hill influence. Not so much Slenderman / Marble Hornets, but I can definitely see the resemblance/relationship there.
Creepiness increases with each chapter, nicely done.
I'm also impressed with how consistent this story is despite the chapters being written over the course of a year and a half (so far). Hope to see a conclusion that explains all this someday. :)
I remember reading the first chapter of this on EQD WAYYYYY back when! Cool to find it still going. Keep it up.
i reckon theres two ways it could of happen either twlights teleport fucked up and created all sortes of alternate relaties or two there all dead and this is there purgatory
Well written. Creepy and disturbing, but consistent. I like it !
Will fave!
This is creepy and scary.