Tell me, what do you think is the most destructive force you know?
For me, it is time.
Time destroys friendships, breaks relationships, purges emotions, crushes kingdoms and commits genocide. Nothing can persist in the face of time. In this very moment, life is slowly fading away into the past. What meaning does anything have in the face of time?
There are stories out here which simply amaze you. They will immerse you, not letting you go until you have reached the very end. And afterwards you will be a bit sad about the story having ended. I can promise you: This is one of those stories.
Join Etheral Tear on an adventure that will lead him far over his personal boundaries, into the Equestrian lore. Where do changelings come from, after all?
Heavily edited by EnderBlaze
Wow just wow...
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Thank you very much
My stories are supposed to always blow your mind and that is what I am working on.
Thank you for commenting by the way and not saying first. I am impressed and you get some cheers for that: ... Maybe two:
And a heart. Hearts are always fitting
Well, I am off to writing chapter 3 now. (Chapter 2 is still being edited right now)
I am keeping an eye on this one liking it so far keep it going please
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Chapter 2 will (hopefully) be released tomorrow, while I am currently still writing on chapter 3, so that could be a bit longer. Sometimes 4000 characters take their time
Don't worry though, I am pretty consistent with writing my chapters.
And last but not least: THANK YOU!
Ehh what?
Gonna watch it for sure
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Well, I messed up
I hope it is not too disturbing... I am going to look for a solution in a bit, but I am freaking busy right now
Anyway, congratulations for being a brony, who actually keeps track of the story and reads it carefully enough to point out such mistakes. You have done great
Thank you for reading the story more careful than me and my editor together
Hmm i though about 2 oh soo used ideas but maybe i was wrong we will see.
I wish I could thumb it up again and again and again, but I can't so...
Here's Neil to do it for me.
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That is actually the nicest thing I have heard... FOREVER
Youtube - Pinkie Pie: FOREVER
Thank you so much
I am giving my best to write chapter 3 for you all, but holy horse apples, it is 3 am already again and I have already skipped sleep yesterday. I really need to get some time from the grey men ("Momo" by micheal ende , if you didn't recoginze)
Just a big THANK YOU from me and a heart and a hug *hug* and a brohoof /)
3457692 Hey it's good. I'll probably release a new story soon which I still need characters for... I just hope it's half as good as this. and Seriously, no Dislikes? I did that once, once! And I was only editing for another guy. I can't wait for the third Chapter, My favorites list has been like stuck at 20 for weeks. it's nice to see the 21 up there every once in a while.
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Awww yeez, now you made me blush...
Don't worry though:
I will get dislikes at some point and you will have your story without dislikes. As long as you keep going for the best writing and put effort into it, you will succeed with that!
And now I feel so honored for being the number 21... Somehow I have the urge now to use that as an medal somewhere in my profile
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But... but... but its a Story?
Anyway, THANK YOU
Not everybrony would have taken their time to reply, especially not with a video. You are mostly welcome!!
When might another chapter come out?
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Wow you are such an asshole
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Thank you. I was about to write that myself.
IIIIIIII am pretty sure, he is joking though
Otherwise, I would be pretty sad
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"Heavily edited by Ender Blaze"
:P Hehe
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No, offense Dream whisper sure his spelling probably terrible even thou I haven't read the chapter yet.
But, we all aren't perfect with our writing (even me) I mean my grammar is just terrible and need to be improve!
We need to be a little nicer with our comments
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I can tell you, he is joking
We both know that my writing is indeed pretty good and has bettered a lot through his efforts. Before he helped me edit, I really sucked with placing my commas and writing like a fool. Right now, my writing can indeed impress him from time to time
So yeah, he was just joking for the old time's sake
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Unle of curs weer kidin
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Whoops I am sorry
Well here have a follow from me
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nnnnononon, Ony folloow me iwf yu lik what I writ :/
itss otay,
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I checked out your stories and I like what I see
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ooh, in whik cas, Thernk yuu!!!
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You weren't THAT bad :P
Sorry I'm late to the party... *Reads* Another chapter well executed, worthy of another thumb which I cannot give. Oh woe is me for I do not have an alternate account, to at least give you two. Again the 21st hasn't failed. Good job. I will be awaiting the next installment, (Comma where period should be cause I can't think of a good thing to say here.)
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The party only starts when you arrive
I only wish more people would actually read the story as everyone seems to enjoy it. Oh cruel world, why can't you show others the way to a light in their day?
Oh cruel world, why do we have to be bound by these laws
when we find ourselves in the rule book's jaws...
Thank you very much. It really means a lot to me
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Um... why doesn't this have more views, likes, comments, favorites, etc?
Well, you got my like. and a free moustache.
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That is what I am also asking myself
I am glad you liked it
No Sir didn't like it... I loved it.
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Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
Then, my reason for being a writer is once again fulfilled.
I just wish I could show more people my work
Anyway, I am glad you loved it
3589597 I could do some PR for you if you want, pull some strings in the PDG Or if you want to promote it yourself, go ahead.
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Oh, I would THANK YOU sooooooooooooooooooooooo (... 15 minutes later ) ooooo much if you could do that. You know, my schedule is really (really ) busy right now and I don't have time to promote nor the knowledge how to even correctly do it
PWEASSEE do it?
Thank you anyway, no matter if you decide to or not to do it
I could reserve you a place as "Advertisement champion" or "Captain advertiser" or "CHAMPION OF THE GODS"
Maybe not the last one
Oh my lord, that was really good.
For some reason every time I read that voice, I lol'd... "Flahp your wingsh boih!"
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Oh, it is sooo nice of you!
I really had doubts about myself after finishing the chapter
But thank you, thank you very much, it really helped me.
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If I didn't have you commenting on this story... It would probably be on hiatus a looong time ago. Thank you for making it worth to write each and every chapter
I don't often get so emotional, but there is nothing more INSPIRING than the commitment of somebrony, who gets up after every chapter and leaves a comment describing his/her reaction. It is heartwarming, probably more than heartwarming eve!
So, thank you once again for doing this.
3691348 I know how much it means to hear encouraging words. Hell if I didn't have three of my friends calling me a genius, I'd have quit writing a long time ago.
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That was weird, I guess I must've missed the lead up last chapter, probo read it too fast , but damn if that wasn't awesome. Good job, I'm about to release a new story soon. If I can get enough guts to throw another number up next to my name or just wipe it out wholesale. What do you think?
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Oh, I hope it wasn't too distracting
And I am a fan of numbers, but I never liked numbers in names too much. I guess that is just my OCD there, because there is no real reason for my dislike. I guess I am just being strange
So, lets conclude to never trust me because I am a crazy brony
Yep. That's me
May Fluttershy guide you in your quest to find the answer
3756221 I am quite insane, and no it wasn't distracting at all. I actually enjoyed this one more than the others. Keep it up.
A thing of beauty.
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I was already looking forward to your reply, like a little child looking forward to being given candy
And now, please excuse me, it is time for me to sleep ( I do not live in the usa )
3809104 Sleep well.
Changeling foal?
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You will see in due time (When I finish writing which could require hundreds of years (or rather not ( or I like to use brackets (and just one more just for fun()))))
3962477 Well just try to get chapters out faster than one a month and me and you should be fine.
Oh my gawd, it's been furevar since you updated, and I must say well worth the wait.
Also that down thumb...
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Who said that
Who the Buck said that?
Who's the slimy little Pegasus Twit, twinkle toed Muffin Hugger here that just signed his own death warrant?
Fluttershy is so sweet.