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Longtooth


I am a copy of an idea in a story told by another. I am a puppet moved by cruel strings. I was told to be here.

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I am not Twilight Sparkle.

I have her body, I have her memories, I have her power. I am not her, and I have done such terrible things. This is my story.

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Great idea for the story, well written too
You have my favourite, my likes and my non pony emoticons because phones suck for commenting on things >_<
Regardless! The story must go on author, I shall be waiting! :)

Greatest ending ever! More now pls?

it almost seems like dissociative identity disorder, but with that the second identity doesn't have the knowledge of the first. curious.

I dunno why this doesn't have more views :/ Great concept and well written, keep it up author, you've got my praise at least ^_^

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This definitely does deserve more views. I really like the idea and execution of it.

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I certainly agree. This is actually one of the more unique stories I've read in a while.

Yup, drugs are bad. M'kay

well...didn't see that coming. so there goes any hope of any kind of good ending. that slippery slope just went straight vertical.

As usual, loving the update. I want to believe you're leaving hints as to who Twilight/person is talking to when telling they're memories...but I'm also too lazy to go looking for hints :P
Keep it up author ^_^ I await thee!

liking this story so far. you should write another story of what happened with the REAL twilight... if you know what i mean by that

MOAR. tis good so im going to splurg (lol made up word) on this series

i am really enjoyiing this! WRITE MOAR:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

3526275 im guessing shining? locked up on top of the mountain with a crazy twilight keeping him prisoner

3527964 I was thinking Discord or Chrysilys (can't spell her name for shit >_<) but aye, Shining is just as possible ^_^

It's getting more awesome by the chapter:moustache:

dont push your self too hard now. these are awesome :pinkiehappy:

Heh, why is it that I can see this finishing with a Bolivian Army Ending?

You can do it, man. I believe in you!

uhhhh im a bit confused. what is the challange thing?

Who needs sleep.. Ps. Can twilight like mind control or some shit if she finds the dark seeds in a pony. Cuzco I really don't want mass murdering tree twilight. Just a thought /input from a fan with an idea. This is your story so fuck other opinions if you don't want it.

Still kinda bugs me that people are missing this great story :/ Ah well I guess, their loss and all that xD
By any chance did you get the idea to turn Twilight/person into a vigilante superhero because of the superhero mlp episode coming out soon? xD
Keep it up dude, looking pretty likely you'll make it in time for the NaNo too ^_^

Congratulations, you earned it. This story kicks ass anyways, so I can live with waiting. Keep up the good work!

Psychopath. NNIIICEEE!!!:twilightsmile:

Congrats on the NaNo dude ^_^

Nice work; I'm enjoying this so far.

Kickass! I wonder what the message was that Twilight left for them?

any prize or anything? or is it just for bragging rights?

Dammit more updates. This is amazing

remember: this is a story.

OLOLOLOLOLO, she put a cap in that ass (table in that spike) :pinkiecrazy:

Hmm, how long before it falls apart now I wonder.

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I'm guessing that the weather emergency and/or Dash have something to do with the black crystal.
So probably next chapter... at least, it will start to.

You should know that this is the first story I've looked at in months that actually made me want to read more of it.
You've my regards mate.

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