The dawn arises, silent shod.
We bow, then go our sep'rate ways.
Inspiring with her slightest nod,
The dawn arises, silent shod.
She works the sky; I work the sod,
Together till I end my days.
The dawn arises, silent shod.
We bow, then go our sep'rate ways.
And the triolet, even shorter and reusing so many lines, was pretty much designed for Big Mac.
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And a little one:
For Big Macintosh.
Mike
Yep
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Mike
I'm probably reading way more into this than I should, but do I detect subtexts of unrequited love, mortality and more?
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Oh, yes:
There's a brief image near the end of issue #10 of the recent IDW Pony comics where Big Mac is hoof-wrestling with Celestia at a "Test Your Strength" booth. So I'd say they understand each other.
Mike
I -- this is amazing
You must be a professional writer, and not only that, but an award-winning professional writer. Beautiful.
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Shhh!
Don't tell anyone!
Thanks, though. There's a severe lack of markets for fixed form light verse, so just having a place to post stuff where folks'll be able to find it is too much fun!
Mike