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DylanDragon
Pinkamena Diane Pie is best pony. :3I write in my free time, so yays! :D
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Normally I'm not one for these type of stories--even though I love yaoi in anime stuff--but I got bored and decided to check this one out. I wasn't disappointed. The characters were in-character, cute, and funny. The ending almost made me giggle. I can see this being a heart-warming story once it updates.
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I'm glad it's living up to your standards. Now I'm going to try my very best to keep achieving that bar you set so high!
I hate gays
3442234 Go fuck yourself then
3442877 Yeah yeah, Kiss me first, baby
3443082 Are you for real? Or are you just trolling? IF you're serious You are a huge moronic cunt.I thought this site is about friendship is magic fanfiction not saying how you hate people for no reason.
This is off to a pretty good start. Keep it up.
Ignore the downvotes. M/M gets a lot of haters on this site, for some hypocritical reason.
awesome another caramac but mac better not be cheating on caramel or im gonna have a big cry session for a week. then ill have to go to soar burn and then if thats done the last thing i have left is thundermel or just OC's i cant do that i cant go to OC Characters!!!
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Hee thanks!
Yeah, M/M stories--in general--get a good amount of downvotes for their gayness. But it's kays.
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But there are infinite possible OCs!
You may want to work on your short description. It left me more perplexed than intrigued.
For a story that claims to focus more on romance and the troubles that couples run into per communication, you might want to try something like:
If anything, the best sentence you have is the first one. Perhaps spin it off a bit, try it.
Your short description is what will draw in potential readers, leaving your story ready to shine.
I'm not into M/M, but I felt you might have needed a hoof with your story.
Good luck!
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Yeah, I'm not really good with summary...
Thanks!
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No problem, the hook is one of the hardest parts to a fic.
You better fix these to or else ill have to beco me a nightmare dweller and haunt you to death*smiles maniaclly*
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Vinyldropsthebase pls. You want to play with meeee???
Imma haunt you faster than the pH change around equivalence point!
See what I did there? Cause you're Vinyl drops the base...
(I'm so lonely...
its so so sad!!! why caramel why?!!!!! and Mac i cant believe you got handsy with thunderlane just to practice!!!
Awww dont be sad im here frou u cutie so smile pls i enjoy ur story>>3457673
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*hoofsie
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Hee all better
3462985hehr glad ur happy my friend i enjoy ur story also i love romantic storys
Perfect thank you
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I wouldn't leave it all saddy-waddy like that
3486913good thank you cutie
oh come on so close to the clop please please post another chapter soon!!!!
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Patience is a virtue
3504949 calm down my friend we are almost there
*trys to hide my erect 16 inch long 6 inch wide stallionhood*
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...Rucky rucky you
3517642 Sorry
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Hee, at least it's large.... XD
I'm surprised this story has so many dislikes. I personally think it's a great story up to this point.
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Haters gonna hate
Thanks, by the way
ho ho damn!!!!! i would ride that dont pass out ride him ride him hard i know Stable HQ and lets just say i have ten of everything and every size.... cuff so retro its all leather bondage now a days!!!
Daaaaaamn, Macintosh. Couldn't you have eased poor Caramel into this? You only got as far as regular sex just recently, after all.
3518197 Thanks im gifted
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...Are you doing anything later...
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Sweetie, your thingy could replace the LHC.
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Accelerated learning...?
3529309 actually no im not i just chopped some wood and fired up for anything in case your wondering.....
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Well well well.....
3529313maybe we could swap some fun
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Oh LHC... *licks control panel* I love you soooo muchhh...
Lol calm ur self>>3529836
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But...but...but...antimatter and quark physics...
3530805shhh your ok
DID U VUT CARAMEL OFF I WILL STAB YOU TO DEATH IF YOU DID
Thankgod you did not cut off caramel if u had........ do I need to say more for you to understand....... I just really
caramel
Lyra: *spies through camera she put in caramel's room* oh my...... *has a nosebleed*
I was right about the nosebleed
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Haha I can tell by your name