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For some it's a time of fun and laughter with cool costumes and candy, but for others it's a time of fear where their worst nightmares walk the streets. On such a night of ghosts and ghouls it's the job of a good friend to comfort those who don't share the same love of being scared.

But what happens when it all goes wrong and what was supposed to be fun becomes terror?

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Comments ( 11 )

This is great! all you need is a decent proof-reader and this in my opinion is one of the best stories there could be in this site!

excellent plot twist here! or maybe it's because I'm practically used to not trusting Pinkie anymore what with all the horror fics and cupcakes and... nevermind.

my phone won't let me favorite this! ugh!

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i'm glad you enjoyed it, to be honest i had my doubts because this is my first ever horror story.

still, it's really nice to have such great feedback. also i'm happy that the twist actually caught someone off guard; i was sorta expecting people to guess it right away.

Yes! For a while you actually had me concerned, but towards the very end, I have to admit you nailed it spot on! Very well done, sir or madame!

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thanks for such high praise; as i said i was afraid people wouldn't like it or were going to guess the end easily, but i'm glad you enjoyed it.:pinkiehappy:

Hey, this was a great story, even if I have read it so out of season... Good work!

3835472 thank you, i'm glad you enjoyed it and i'm rather glad you found it at all.

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Oh, it was on my "Read Later" list, which recently reached 200 stories, and I'm working on lowering the number... :twilightsheepish:

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ohhh i do that, although i dont think i have that many.

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Yeah, I've a problem with compulsive adding...

3837809 haha thats the problem with browsing stories, you always end up adding loads that you wont read for ages.

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Yeah, and they all seem to be so good! It's kind of a curse... Even if I read a whole one per day, I'd still take some good eight months, and that doesn't count those that are too long to read in one sitting! XD

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