Ponysopher
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Very well done I must say, good sir!
her budding violet marehood presented itself to her. correct me if I am wrong but I think that should be him not her but still an amazing story I was gonna go to bed but the moment I saw this posted I had to read it I always look forward to your stories you did an amazing job can't wait for the next one bro.
Jolly good show sir.
we need a ch 2
YES!
Wow.................I'm stunned
Well done.
Hey. HEY.
You're a good person for writing this. I've been dying for a really romantic batpone/vampone fic.
Bretty good
Goodness me. I do believe I have the vapors.
Goddamn that was hot.
Well done!
~Skeeter The Lurker
Ze done well. This will be a story I won't forget anytime soon.
You did good, kid. Keep it up.
This is so very well written! It flows so well and has such a unique yet familiar style that grabs me by the imagination and dunks me under the waters of make-believe with little to no effort. I look forward to seeing more from you!
That......I can't even fully say how amazing that was!
The writing was so vivid, the characters oozed sexuality and yet held aspects that you could relate to. I tip my hat you you, you did awesome!
I came to this story hoping for a good one and it was.
if you get what I mean
Now where have I heard this name before, my friend?
Just joking; for a small work this is good. Not great (then again I'm not one to judge) but very well done and executed for such a simple story. No offence meant, you're a one great guy
EDIT: And before more people misunderstand me, I'm not being an ass; I know Ponysopher and we're on good terms. And if I happen to voice an opinion that changes from yours (I do like the story, like I said originally), please don't be an ass about it.
I was gonna go for the >Inb4 Skeeter, but he was already here. Ah well.
Nice job.
This story was good, but it kind of made me sad. You see he won't feel so good in the morning. He'll wake up and she'll be gone, probably forever. Oh sure, he'll know he mattered to her, but that's just it, I think he'll miss her and want to be with her. Poor guy.
What the!? IS THAT SVELTEYANKA ON THE COVER PICTURE!?
Well...dame. This was a great story you made and I love it the whole time I was reading it. Still, is it a bad thing if this story sex scène aroused me❓
Incredibly written, I was hanging on every word. I wasn't expecting that level of writing. A really awesome 9/10.
Mmmmm wonderful story. Absolutely and delightfully sensual.
I must say Dusk Dancer reminds me of my Darling Wet in more ways then one. She's so delightfully sensual and mysterious.
I think if I'd be so bold I would love to invite Dusk to one of me and Wet's little sessions. She would make a fine addition.
3424944 You mean 10/10.
The sex was very good, but why do all people see bat ponies as blood suckers? Even real life bats do not suck blood. They eat fruit by nature. Also I kinda dislike the fact you said bat ponies and other equestrian ponies can't get each other pregnant. That's kinda like saying unicorns and earth ponies or even pegasi cannot. But that's just me I suppose. I would for once like to see a story where the female is actually taking a chance at pregnancy. It adds so much more excitement to the sex.
Should I cum in her or pull out at the last moment? Can I hold out? Perhaps she's so much into the throes of passion that she won't listen to her male partner. Even though he is screaming "PLEASE! I CAN'T HOLD ON ANY LONGER! I AM ABOUT TO BLOW!" That's passionate sex if you ask me.
Still a good read. 6/10 IMO.
3425498 You do know that mares cannot get pregnant unless they are in heat, right? Even if a stallion did cum inside a mare, if she's not in heat, there's no chance that she could get pregnant.
Now, if she still has cum inside her when she goes into heat the next day, that's a different story, although I'm not sure how that would work. I know that semen can live for up to five hours outside of the human body, but inside a vagina? I'm not so sure about that part.
This is a really intresting short story, showing something of what can and likely happens amongst the more powerful, though transient, movers of resources in Equestria and Canterlot.
Just something thats bugging me. Im sure Ive heard the name Dusk Dancer before, maybe in a story where she and Sunny Day enjoyed their time when younger, at the carnival, faiground.
I wonder if this might someday lead to a collection of stories about the anonymous buisinessman who supplies various services to the elite of Canterlot, ending up most definitely with the Princess Seal Of Approval.
3425447 No, 11/10!
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Horseshoe, Pigmy and most bats dont drink blood- Vampire bats do.
Check your info on Chiroptera.
I'm not big on M/F but this was a good read
3425615 This would be case evident if the equestrians in question were anywhere near related to earthling ponies. But seeing as this is all theoretical... we honestly just don't know. I would like to see a story like these were the female in question is a little more apprehensive about weather or not she wants the male to cum inside her. Adds a bit to the story ya know?
The fact that right at the start the author used the "oh we're different species card" kinda makes the sex lose some of its allure. The are the same species. Bat pony Earth pony etc... just different breeds.
Still... it was a good read. Doesn't deserve a upvote from me as this narration is rather common for this type of story, but it doesn't need to be downvoted either.
3425711 I think the author meant that earth ponies, pegasi, and unicorns are of a different "breed" of pony compared to bat ponies.
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Well, that's actually a good idea that I plan to make use of. Let's just say that it will involve Rarity though
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By all means, be my guest
3425726 Different breeds, same species. So pregnancy should be a concern.
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I would sooo love to see Rarity get the Princess Seal Of Approval, for Services Rendered. Especially if such services are for designing and ,road testing, lingerie.
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Excellent I assure you she won't regret it.
3426046 You only need to look friend... Rarity's got a line of sexy apparel. Have you not heard of Rarity's secret?
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Umm, I dont think I read that particular story yet, but Im over 80 stories read so far, so its trying to work out which story group its in.
Trouble is, I keep overdoing things. A good example, is, after ten seconds of thought of Rarity doing specialist lingerie, has she and Twilight cooperated on polymorphic clothing, or she and Pinkie pie on edible only when eaten clothing, etc?
Very batty. This pony approves.
3426156 It is indeed batty..and extremely cloppy.
I would love to see more, if not of these two then perhaps other characters. The only think I didn't like was the accent. Made me keep thinking of some huge Russian lady. It's been so long since one of these kind of batpony/vampire fics came out. I'm quite happy.
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He is actually referring to a semi-SFW series of works of art under that name. Rarity's secret isn't actually a story.
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First, let me thank you for your comment and the praise within. I'm glad to hear you liked it. Yet as for the remark on the accent, I find it extremely difficult to imagine your dislike of this particular accent on those grounds. Russian sounds like the polar opposite of French (and similarly, this character is established and depicted as elegant and crafty, not well-built and strong willed, but I suppose appearance is beyond the point). One thing I think at least a few people might realize is that I spent considerable time choosing Dusk Dancer's words so that they flowed perfectly, so as to resemble a Romantic language like French. Slavic languages on the other hand, are anything but flowing and are filled with nonwestern, guttural sounds that are foreign to tongues like the one here. In short, I have no idea why you could be saying that.
3426395 Dat picture
Maybe that's just me, but I wouldn't call 7:35 pm as "at night". It actually got me confused for a few moments. It's not that terribly late now, isn't it? I guess that "in the evening" would be more fitting in here, although my opinion here may be influenced by the fact that I usually consider midnight as a good time to finally go to bed. ^^
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Is that you, Batty? O:
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Who says they're the same species? We have barely any information on batponies in show canon.
Also most species of bats eat insects, the largest ones largely eat fruit though, and there are a couple blood-drinking bats in South America (tiny, and they prefer cattle).
3426661 When I was reading it, for some reason, it read with a Russian accent immediately. I didn't have to decide what the accent was, that was just the first one that I read. I'm sorry if that offended you. And you didn't answer about a second story O:
3426930 You're not the first to appreciate my avatar XD.
Nice avatar, changelings are surprisingly vacant from them. Good story...hmmm, any human on bat pony stories?
So, they fell in love by having sex. I've seen wierder