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Octavia's Last Goodbye

Just a sad little story i thought up after seeing a pic of tavi crying. its my first story so please give me any feedback necessary

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Diamond Sparkle

Diamond Sparkle #1 · Oct 31st, 2013 · · ·

Poor Octavia.

Soft Shell

Soft Shell #2 · Oct 31st, 2013 · · ·

No, It's never goodbye, not really.
Think of it more as, See you later.
Because no matter how far we travel,
No matter how much time passes,
We are never truely apart,
And we will always see each other again.

blaid23

blaid23 #3 · Oct 31st, 2013 · · ·

3423034 Your words ring out clearly w/ Peace & Comfort. For those who have b4 us, we shall see them again in Heaven. AMEN!!

Soft Shell

Soft Shell #4 · Oct 31st, 2013 · · ·

3423200
Whoa Whoa Whoa!
Lets not go putting labels on anything now shall we?

Shining Eclipse

Shining Eclipse #5 · Nov 2nd, 2013 · · ·

Thank you all who liked my story (not like like as in thumbs up but you know "like") It was my first story (that i finished) and im just glad you actually liked it.

Aslatiel

Aslatiel #6 · Nov 6th, 2013 · · ·

great story. These stories don't really make me sad unless there is a long story about them being together and something happening about halfway through. But that's personal preferance. Great story!