Fluttershy's dark urges have finally reached their peak. So she has to let out tension, but who will be first?
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would the breaking of the mind fall under a Dark tag?
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I'm not sure actually. When I think Dark, I'm thinking some S&M shit going down with the whips and other things. And I don't really see it as a Mindbreak, but more of they give into the pleasure.
Who else thinks this is Dark?
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well in sweetie's case it was brought on by use of chemicals, so she did not naturaly give in, more like was pushed into accepting. That is just my thinking
Is it wrong for.me to like this fluttershy?
3505222
I think at the very least a warning of mind-breaking should be on the front. It is a dark matter, whether there's pain involved or not, and some people may be turned off by it (others who are more sensitive might feel depressed by it)
I can't wait until Rarity or Applejack find out... how dare Fluttershy hog them for herself!
I really do like the idea of Fluttershy having her own harem, you're good at making me want to know what Fluttershy is thinking during all of this but I feel like it'll be revealed when it needs to be.
I agree with 3505695 , you should put up the warning for mind break but I don't think it's in dark territory yet. Whether or not it will be in the future, I have no idea but I can't wait to find out!
Hmmmm thinking everything over and especially what I plan for the next chapter (Now that Apple Bloom is next) I should add the Dark label.
And (SNAP) she is broken. definatly needed a dark tag
i wonder if rarity will be pissed that fluttershy has stolen her lover
3506473 or maybe they can share her
And like that, another one bits the dust, or the pillow in this case.
...eh story is ok, its just kind of very insainly fast
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3506374 yep cause it''s so awesome
Ah, so that's what you meant by mind break... well that's just plain mean, Fluttershy!
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This was fun! :D