Fluttershy's dark urges have finally reached their peak. So she has to let out tension, but who will be first?
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So what does a massage have to do with foal- aaaand never mind.
I'm happy we finally get a bit of back story from Fluttershy's perspective. Now her actions make more sense.
So the finale is almost upon us, oh can only imagine whats going to happen there. This really is a good foalcon story, I can always enjoy it better when they all enjoy it themselves. I can't wait for the finale Alche
aww its ending i will miss seeing new chapters
seeing as how this story was going, its expected to have to come to an end. Was still a good story though but a little on the weird side.
think of it this way, when he finishes this story, he'll have more time to update his other stories.
So,i noticed that this chapter is not my
favorite,i probably am mistaken,but i
feel like there are plot holes. But because
we don't need to make this a harsh critique,
I will instead do a thing I did on another
story with plotholes. Here we go:
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Everything wrong with
Deep Tissue Massage
1.Private rooms,uhhhh... In case you don't
know what these are,they usually are for a
pony on his/her own with no one else.
2.Fluttershy implies that she couldn't help
the birds because one was named Mayday.
Fluttershy is a dick to pets with weird names.
Also, the pony with a pet named Angel asks why
someone would name his pet something
symbolic/ironic?
3.Fluttershy's mouth waters thinking of what
she will do when she is home? Man,she really
wants those apples!
4.When did this all begin? Chack chapter 1 for
that.
5.'Memorial Flashback'-Cliché
6.Twilight has been asked by the princess to
read books what causes her injury,starting this
clop.Trollestia at her best!
7.Twilight comes because she pulled a muscle but
says that it is nothing too serious before asking
for help. I smell contradictions...
8.At this point,Fluttershy must be disappointed,
since TS didn't ask for instant sex.
9.That isn't how couchbeds wwork,or should work
for that matter.
10.Fluttershys "How does it feel?" feels more like
a "Are you aroused yet?"-question.
11.TS asks why she never had a massage before.
12.Apparently Twilight is so in need that her friend
can trigger that by simply massaging her.But Fluttershy
will surely help.
13.Horn is mostly a material made of bone,and is thus
inable to be sensitive or to trigger nerves in general.
14,"Seriously,Twilight,I have shy in my name and I am
more direct and honest than you are in this story."
15.'[...]as the only care taker of animals'? Is it her
only care to take animals? Is she an animal thief?
16.Horngasm.
17.Filly Twilight! Get your book forts ready!
18. Physically it should be impossible to have a libido
of an mare when transformed into a foal,since her brain
is limiting that access and has not developed it fully.
19.Actually,aging magic is very straining and complicated,so
she would not even have the physical powers left to pleasure
herself.
20.There is a difference between loving and aroused,so
we have the fact that fluttershy is a polygamous lover
and that every pairing with Twilight is destroyed.
But since this includes Equestria girls,this is not a sin.
20.90% nympho mode,presented to you by science!
21.There is a difference between nymphomatic and aroused,
but it would be a weird twist if TWilight is a nympho.
22.This is her first time with a female pony,so she enjoys
foalcon for the first time.This contradicts the second chapter,
which states it was years ago,what couldn't have been since Twilight
needed to be an alicorn to accidentally cast the foal spell.
23.Fluttershy states she has been with some stallions and pinkie,
a mare.Contradicting the contradiction.
24.Twilight on the other hand is introduced in this chapter and thus
is allowed to have her first time here,if she wouldn't have been a nympho
as stated beforehand.
25.Thanks to Twilights comparison of an foal leg with a stallionhood,
I will never get the image of a foal who pushed her leg too deep inside
her pussy while clopping and being stuck out of my mind.
Thanks,Twilight Sparkle.
26.Careful Twilight,your Maud Pie is slipping with you monotone "Me too."
27.Twilight accidentally casts the counterspell to the foal spell.
Deus ex Machina!
28.Also,having Twilights arm still inside while it growing is bound to
hurt at some point.
29.And thus,everytime someone wanted to talk to her without
interrupting the conversation she was having,Fluttershy got
aroused of twilight.
30.Another contradiction: We know that Fluttershy gets off of
foals and that TS can cast a foal spell.We also know that they
met about a month ago to fuck. So how could it have been years
since Fluttershy dealt with her urges through another mare or foal?
31.And so,everypony was wondering why twilight was tapping her
shoulder during the hug.
Sin count: 31
Sentence: Having the arm stuck inside someone
"Oh,it's nothing too serious."
4267049 LittleshyFiM is that you?