Fluttershy's dark urges have finally reached their peak. So she has to let out tension, but who will be first?
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You monster!
*looks around to see if someone is watching this story*
Make some moar
I did notice a few spelling mistakes here an there but nothing serious.
Kinda curious to see where this goes, good start but maybe go into Fluttershy's head on why she's doing it and maybe why Scootaloo in particular. I have had an idea where Fluttershy and Rainbow are a couple and they adopt Scoots, needless to say they take 'special' care of her.
This seems like an interesting story. Can't wait to see whats next.
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That sounds like an interesting story, write about it mate
I also want any of Fluttershy's thoughts to be hidden for now, so she becomes unpredictable.
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That... actually sounds better, go with that.
Also that idea is pretty much mostly clop
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This story will be mostly clop as well but I will be slow with the start. So write your story and I will most likely fav it
So far I like it. Though I was hesitant at first I found myself saying wait that's it I want more. Look forward to it keep up the good work.
Aww come on it was just getting good. Can't wait for more.
That chapter title is not a good sign, isn't the point to get people to read it? I have nothing against foalcon, but that title....
PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GRAMMAR CHANGE THE TITLE! It's "loss" not "lose".
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Thank you, for some reason I completely forgot the difference lol
"I approve of this story" - ᶘ ᵒᴥᵒᶅ
This seems like quite the interesting read. You can be sure that I will be following up on this story
Alchemicgree i got a question when will more chapters of this story come out and i like it
more please and no, this does not mean im interested in foal-con, just this story.
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Chapters will come out whenever I am able to write them out, there is no form of schedule for two reasons.
1. I don't want to get stressed or make promises I can't keep.
2. I don't want to give my readers false hope.
3478136 ok
Downvoted for bad writing. Won't critique.
ill give it an eh out of 10. could do with some fixin but other than that, it seems to be going fast( in a bad way)
but good news, your good at the actual writing and the story seems mildly readable
I will give this a thumbs
this is all helpful criticism so please don't be mad.
Nice fic, but I think you need an editor to fix the fic's multiple grammar errors.
coop
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needs a * after moan
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needs end " marks.
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Bow-chicka-bow-wow! Go Fluttershy! I can't wait to see how this plays out.
Missed half of this fic, and it's not faved for some reason. But I'm re-reading the first half.
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Same errors as last time.