Visiting Hours
Voices in My Head
Original 4 chapters by ponyofawesome92
Continuation by hydrowormawormmadeoutofhydro
Chapter 7 - Visiting Hours
At Golden Oak Library, The remane-ing 4 (And Spike, Gummy and Mrs. Cake) were discussing was up with Pinkie yesterday. Mrs. Cake began with saying that Pinkie has split personality and how's she's now in the mental institution.
"Aw... Split personality, that makes perfect sense. She played us for fools." Rarity commented. "Why didn't she tell us before?"
"She doesn't like her other side, she's dangerous." Mrs. Cake said.
"NO FREAKING DUH!!" Rainbow bursted out in anger. "Sorry... She threw a dart in Fluttershy's eye."
The rest gasped. "Why didn'tcha tells us sooner, Sugahcube?"
"My brain lost a gear at the sight of that 'Pinkie' had hurt Fluttershy! The Hospital did sent me a letter this morning that she'll be okay, just half blind."
"That's a relief." Spike said.
"Only because she still lives. I wouldn't be surprised if Fluttershy's now scared to death of Pinkie. I don't know who to blame if Fluttershy shuts herself off from society again. Since she was shot in the eye, so her hoof/eye coordination will be trash, so she'll fly like. like... like......" Rainbow would start to tear up if she had any tears left. "I can't think of an... an..."
"An analogy?" Twilight finished.
"Something like that. What did she do to the rest of you?" Rainbow asked. "Besides defriending you?"
"Nothing." Spike said.
"Kicked me into wall." Twilight nonchalantly said.
Gummy looked in two different directions.
"Accused me of having drinking problems, because of Pinkie Pie. Which DO NOT!" Rarity emphasized.
"Nothing." Applejack said.
"Nothing, I just had to cancel her parties." Mrs. Cake said.
"Of course... Why Fluttershy?" Rainbow asked. "I wish I could hit that other Pinkie without hurting Pinkie."
"Anger won't help, darlin'" Applejack said.
"I know, I know. Imma broken record."
"Not really." Twilight retorted.
"What are we going to do?" Rarity asked.
"I think we should visit her while the visiting hours are still open. We might get an idea what to do." Twilight said. She looks at Rainbow, who is not really paying attention. "We can visit Fluttershy too, Rainbow."
"Huh, wha?" Rainbow stopped staring at nothing.
"We're going to visit Pinkie and Fluttershy."
"What are we waiting for?"
In the hospital, Pinkie was sobbing in her straight jacket in her hospital room. Pinkamena was enjoying it.
At the reception, the remane-ing 4, Mrs. Cake and Spike were asking to visit their friends, they decided to visit Pinkie first. "Please follow Doctor Anton Virus, he's the one treating your friend Pinkie Pie." The receptionist said.
"As he said, follow me." Doctor Virus said. They followed him. "I'm sure you want to know her condition, correct?"
"Yes." Twilight said.
"Are you aware of her multiple personality disorder?"
"Yes." The group said in some form or another.
"Both personalities are stable by themselves."
"Her evil split personality being stable? Even the normal Pinkie Pie is debatable!" Rainbow yelled.
"Shh!" Everypony said.
"Dashie?" Said a familiar voice in a room they passed by.
"Fluttershy!" She had a bandage over her eye.
"Shh!" Everypony repeated.
"I'm so glad you're okay. Um... We'll visit you later... Pinkie Pie needs us more at the moment."
"Eep! Pinkie's here?" Fluttershy hid under the covers.
"Yes," Doctor Virus said. "we have time to explain everything to you later. Try to calm yourself in the mean time."
"O-Okay." The group with Dr. Virus walked past the room Fluttershy is in. Her friends waved as they moved on.
"As I was saying, both personalities are stable by themselves. But both personalities contrast each other really bad. What one wants the other doesn't want at at all. Imagine you had to share your body with your evil twin, except not as bad."
"But still pretty bad?" Mrs. Cake asked.
"Yes."
"But Pinkie Pie never showed any sign of her alter-ego until now. How did she hide it this well?" Twilight asked.
"I just realized her birthday showed it, Darlings." Rarity's light bulb glowed.
Rainbow facehooved hard. "Why didn't I see that?"
"...That was kind obvious ain't?" Applejack felt kinda sheepish, the others agreed
"Am I missing something?" Mrs. Cake asked.
"I'm wondering that too." Spike said.
"We'll tell you later." Twilight said. "How did she hide it so well?"
"The meaner personality admitted that the nice one repressed the mean one really far back in her mind. The nice one kinda forgot about her about her for while. The nice one's insecurity helped the mean one resurface."
"Does that work?" A handful asked.
"How should I know? I cure regular illnesses. Not mental illnesses."
"Why are you treating her then?" Rainbow asked with anger.
"Ponyville has an astounding record of having trouble with hiring psychiatrists. It extents to 32 years, we haven't had much luck." Dr. Virus said.
"As Princess, I will make sure you'll get one." Twilight said.
"Thank you, Princess." They finally stopped in front of a door. "We're here." They stood before a door with bars for a window.
"Finally, that took forever." Rainbow said.
"She's behind the door. I suggest comforting the nice one, and keep a slightly open mind with the meaner one, I know that will be difficult."
Some swore that they heard Pinkie holding back her laughter from the latter statement.
"Good luck, ladies." Doctor Virus opened the door. "I'll wait outside if you need me."
Inside they saw Pinkie straight maned, straight jacketed lying on her belly, looking lifelessly against the the wall on the right.
To be continued...
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"Deletion limbo"? What's that suppose to mean? Are you saying that when an incomplete story doesn't get updated within a certain amount of time, it will be deleted?
3793078 It was between life and death. It was killed, but it was still alive in a folder I made for editing purposes. So it's only alive because of me.
3793358 So when an incomplete story doesn't get updated within a certain amount of time, it won't be deleted?
3793365 It won't. The original author deleted it because of her frankly many stupid reasons. I won't get into those.
firebirdabirdoffire i got a question when will the next chapter for this story come out because i like it
3819721 Yes. I'm currently writing for both Super-Stallion and Night Mist a handful of chapters for Foal adventures. and finishing Scootaloo's Guardian respectively.
I would be struggling juggling them. Putting this story on hold made sense to me. It won't get the Hypnotized Fluttershy treatment.
But once the Foal adventures. chapter are done, I can safely do both this story and Night Mist's.
Any more questions you want to ask?
3819742 ok and nvm i found Scootaloo's Guardian story so i don't have any questions
3819779 I haven't written a part of it yet that you can see. The first chapter I'm writing for it is still in progress. But the way it the last current chapter ends is satisfying enough.
3819905 ok
3839446 Quick and to the point. But you spelled "more" wrong, and in all capital letters. The smiley face was also kinda unnecessary. You get a B-
All joking aside the comments below explain why this story is on a brake.
I made the same mistake. 'Imma' is a contraction of 'I'm gonna'. It is actually 'I'm a'.
I made the same mistake. 'Imma' is a contraction of 'I'm gonna'. It is actually 'I'm a'.