The sweet life of Pinkie Pie takes a sudden turn when she is diagnosed with type 2 Diabetes.
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Can't wait for more
Interesting story, I'm looking forward to see the next chapter. However, there are some mistakes (mainly typos and missing commas):
finally
Should be:
There's also a missing quotation mark before "And about your new lifestyle."
Should be:
The red comma is an Oxford comma - it's optional, but some people like it.
The commas should be also in this sentence:
I'm not sure if it's all, and I don't have much faith in my grammar skills, so I advice you finding a proofreader/editor.
3443004 That is actually my fault. I edited this rather quickly; and only looked through it twice. I will fix it.
3443355 Yes, but Zelos isn't on.
3443681 He's offline at the moment. If you wish to continue this conversation, please private message me. I don't want to take up too much of Zelos' comment area.
3443813 Ok then.
Rather interesting.
Will you be updating this? *looks hopeful*
When's the next chapter?
6324178 Probably never, as much as I loathe the answere. Still there is always hope of me getting enough inspiration to continue it.
6324244 This story has potential. If you can write about someone like Pinkie get though this then I'm sure it would have a positive effect on those who share her situation.
Huh...... Well already this is WAY better of a direction than that one story where she kills herself via eating sugar due to her having diabetes......... Which is actually the slowest, most agonizing, and downright PAINFUL of ways you can try to off yourself with.
Ah, I remember reading this a long time ago. Wish this would continue still, it has such a great plot and the characters are portrayed wonderfully.
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I got partway due to my fear of needles scaring me from switching to insulin injections for my type 2 as my doctor kept saying to do. Luckily for me it was just inflammatory pancreatitis and not my pancreas failing. Still spent a week in the hospital, and it hurt.