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Rainbow Dash's life couldn't be more perfect. She has awesome friends, a cool pet, and most importantly, a chance at joining THE Wonderbolts, Rainbow's idols and the single greatest flying team in all of Equestria.

Unfortunately for Rainbow Dash, even the fastest flier in Equestria can slip up every once in a while.

When a failed trick causes her to hit her head, she slowly starts to realize her past is a bit different than how she remembered it.

Unsure of how to deal with the flood of new found memories, Rainbow Dash enlists the help of Twilight Sparkle to help uncover the truth and find out why the past that Dash remembers is different than what these new memories reveal to her.

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The cross-eyed mail carrier smiled, her snout crinkling slightly "Okay, Rainbow Dash, I'll tell the others. See you around, and good luck!" "Thanks Derpy. See ya later!" Rainbow Dash grinned and took the stack of letters from the mail-mare, before darting back inside.

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The cross-eyed mail carrier smiled, her snout crinkling slightly "Okay, Rainbow Dash, I'll tell the others. See you around, and good luck!"

"Thanks Derpy. See ya later!" Rainbow Dash grinned and took the stack of letters from the mail-mare, before darting back inside.

3415989 Thanks for the tip, it is my very first fic, so any constructive criticisms are very much welcome. I also need to get an editor, so do bear with me for a little bit and I'll definitely get some pre-readers for the next chapter. I got tired of waiting to post this, so i hope to improve quality a bit for the next chapter. Just don't expect it any time soon.

3416473 ok then, if you want to know how not to write a story, read my first two. (Not Harmony Squad, although you can read that if you like)

OK, this looks interesting, tracking. :twilightsmile:

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