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Twinkletail


I write poni. I am easily distracted. I like Oreos.

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Twilight's only had her wings for about a week, only a little shorter than the time since she started dating Rainbow Dash. She's yet to learn how to preen, and Rainbow's willing to help teach her!

Written for One-Shotober.

(As a note, you can get the original source of the picture by clicking it. The original is beautiful and has Fluttershy in it as well, but I had to edit her out (poorly) to fit the story. Please don't hate me for editing her out; she's my second-favorite pone, but she doesn't fit in the story!)

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Comments ( 34 )

Hehe. Cute.

Not bad at all.

~Skeeter The Lurker

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Damn, and just when I thought I could beat you!

Well, just from the short description, I have come to the consensus that this can only end in sex.

Now this was cute. nice work

After reading "Slender" by that asshole, Wiz, I needed something cute and fluffy like this to remind me of the fact that all of my favorite characters are not, in fact, dead.
Bravo, the Twidash group needs more like this.
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How. How do you find these things so bloody fast?
Teach me your ways, Oh great finder of fics.

Damn this is cheesy....


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Damn, I've become a cheesy bastard :twilightblush:

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No clue. I just do.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Yeahhhhhhhhhhhhh CUTE

hnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnng the feeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeels! :raritycry:

It was cute, but it felt like it needs something. Maybe a little more tension or rising action.

Short, sweet and fluffy :twilightsmile:

The cuteness! The fluff! The adorableness! It's too much! What have you done!? You've created a monster! A fluffy, adorable monster! It's coming for us all! RUUUUUUUNNNNN!!! Save yourselves!

*drowns in feels*

so what I'm trying to say is that that was way too fluffy for it's own good.

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So in other words,

There needs to be a new 'Cute' tag for stuff like this.

SHL

Celestia, this is soooooo cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee :rainbowkiss:

Dawwwwwwwww:rainbowkiss:

(The only emoticon that represents cute,no wonder it's used so often in these comments)

Cuteness...overload...

*There are no words*
Your story = :rainbowkiss:
then i gasp : :pinkiegasp:

Writing: :pinkiehappy:
TwiDash ship: :facehoof:

You can have the upvote anyway. :derpytongue2:

I've been keening for some preening. Preening might lead to scheming.:twilightblush: Scenarios that are steaming with even more preening which would lead to estatic screaming from the preening:twilightoops:
Not that kind of story? Yeah, I know. :twilightsmile::rainbowlaugh:
It's super-uber-mega-cute, so it gets an upvote from me.

3718165 *achoo* Ah, you *achoo* douche! Don't you know that *achoo* people are allergic to alliteration? *achoo* Ok admittedly that one was self inflicted.

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That's not alliteration! That's Rhyme! Your allergies are invalid!

D'aaaawwwww!

Definite upvote.

3777172 Fair enough. I saw my chance to make a joke and tried.

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If it makes you feel better, I lost my chance to make a Pheonix Wright joke.

Very sweet.:rainbowkiss:

I look forward to the next chapter:twilightsmile:

Hey, I'm upvote 300! I feel kinda special!!:pinkiehappy:

This was a ridiculously cute story and I absolutely loved it, and I'm not really even into shipping stories. It was also very well edited. With the exception of the second and third large paragraphs, which really ought to be broken down since you have subject shifts halfway through both, it is nearly flawless. Great job!:twilightsheepish:

So cute! :heart:

Very adorable!

Lovely! Loved it! =D

Hey, I enjoyed the story and was just wondering something. You said the picture originally had Fluttershy in it, but when I click the word source, the picture comes up without Fluttershy. Could you post the link of the whole picture please. Thank you.

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That's strange...the source still links to the whole picture on my end,

Here you go.

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