Chapter 4 - "Party"
Pinkie, much to her own surprise, decided that the party could wait a bit longer, so she put it on hold and decided to show Caboose a few more sights. She was happy that she could show everything Ponyville has to offer to her friend. Caboose looked off in the distance and sees the most wonderful of sights.
"Oh my gosh, a fountain!" He yelled with ecstasy. "And a magical castle! I want to live in a castle one day."
"That's Canterlot, silly! It's where the princesses live." Pinkie Pie giggled.
"Oh my gosh. I've always wanted to be a princess." Caboose gasped, then looks at Pinkie. "But now I think I want to be a queen."
"Only if I get to be the king!" Pinkie exclaimed. "I'm glad I met you Caboose. You're really fun to have around."
"Why, thank you Pinkie!" Caboose smiled. "You are really fun to be around yourself."
"Alright, enough of the views." Pinkie said, walking away. "It's time to party."
"Oki-doki.' Caboose said, following Pinkie.
After a few more minutes of walking they found themselves in front of a giant tree.
"Oh wow. Look how big that tree is!" Caboose said. "That must be the biggest tree EVER!"
Twilight heard the remark and walked up to the door an opened it.
"Hey Caboose." Twilight said, remembering what she had said to him before. "How’s it going?"
"Pretty good, I guess." Caboose said, raising the volume of his voice for no particular reason. "Yeah, I was sitting on a bridge and I was crying because I was sad, but then Pinkie came by and she gave me a cupcake and now I'm happy again."
"Oh, that's good." Twilight said. "Caboose, I'm really sorry for what I said. Do you think you can forgive me?"
"Yeah, I can." Caboose said, smiling at Twilight. "Apology accepted."
Caboose stepped out of the way and let Pinkie hop in first. After she did, Caboose followed and looked around the room. There was books everywhere.
"I have never seen this many diaries in my life." Caboose gasped.
"Oh, they aren't diaries." Twilight explained. "They are just books. Some are about history, some are about magic, some are just adventure novels."
"Oh. I like adventures."
"So Pinkie. I assume you brought him here for the party?" She asked, raising her brow. "I haven't set anything up so I'm so-"
"Oh that's okay Twi, just go get the others and let me and Caboose will handle it from here."
"Oh, okay. Be right back then." Twilight said, leaving the house.
"She doesn't mind." Pinkie said, reaching in her mane. "Behind her book worm exterior lies a die hard party pony, I just know it."
"There's a pony inside of her?" Caboose gawked. "Does it hurt?"
Pinkie let out a sarcastic sigh, but then started to laugh.
"You're silly. Time to set up the party!" Pinkie yelled, yanking a cannon out of her hair. "Pinkie Pie style."
She lit the fuse on the cannon and it promptly erupted, spewing out confetti, a boombox, plates with snacks on them and a piñata flew out.
"What? No punch?" Caboose asked.
"Hang on, this thing always jams." Pinkie said, hitting the cannon. The cannon then sputtered and shot a punch bowl onto a table.
"I want one of those."
"Well we'll just have to make you one then." Pinkie promised. "But let's wait for the girls."
Caboose and Pinkie sat next to each other, waiting for the girls to arrive. About ten minutes later, all the girls walked back through the door.
"Hey, they're here." Caboose said jumping up and down. "Hello little ponies! Are you ready to have some fun?"
"We sure as apple pie are." Applejack said.
"Great." Caboose said, slamming his hoof down on the boombox. "Let's get started then."
Caboose then started dancing oddly. It was somewhere between break dancing and a seizure. Twilight and the others burst out laughing.
"You're just jealous." Caboose said happily, jiggling his butt. "You know you can't party as hard as me."
"Oh it is ON!" Pinkie yelled, running next to Caboose doing her own strange dance.
Twilight looked at the others and shrugged.
"Looks like they're having a good time." Fluttershy said.
"Yeah." Rainbow Dash agreed. "But why should they be the only ones having fun?"
Rainbow Dash went over to where Pinkie and Caboose were rolling on the floor and started to dance.
"When in Canterlot..." Twilight said, walking to where they were dancing, and was followed by the other ponies.
All the ponies were having a good time until the ground suddenly started to shake and all the ponies fell to the ground except for Caboose.
"What's happening?" Fluttershy asked, trying to rise to her feet.
"I don't know." Twilight gasped. "But whatever it is I don't like it."
Caboose closed his eyes as hard as he could and then ran out the door, staring up at the sky.
"Please no." Caboose yelled. "I want to stay! I don’t want to go!"
"What is he yelling about?" Rainbow Dash asked.
"I don't know." Twilight replied. "Caboose! Get back in here!"
Caboose ignored Twilight’s plea and stayed outside yelling. "Stay away! You don't want to see me when I get angry!"
"Who in Celestia’s name is he talking to?" Rarity asked. "And why is he yelling?"
The earthquake soon stopped and all the girls got their balance back. Pinkie Pie then ran to Caboose, who was looking up in the air. She saw something, something strange, falling from the sky. And falling fast.
"ShiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiIIIIIIIIIII-" Church yelled, slamming into the ground.
"Everybody, out of the way!" Sarge yelled, landing on Church.
"Ow! Jesus Christ, you broke my spine." Church complained.
"Ah, quit being such a wuss." Sarge said, getting up shaking his head. "I always knew the blues were cowardly, but now I know just how much, and plus you aren't even real, so why would you care if... say... what's with all these horses?"
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Dun dun DUN.
pfffffffft
cant say i saw that coming. id prefer if this went on a littel longer. theirs so much potential for this to be a great fic. but if you really want to end it, don't ask us for an opinion, do what you think will be best.
edit: feels?
Alright guys, I'm letting you guys choose how the story ends/continues. The choices are at the end of the fifth chapter.
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Yes. Pinkie/Caboose might end up getting hurt... badly.
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"/continues"
this is the key word efend, use it!
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Choose one of the actual choices
#1 - Caboose stays put.
#2 - Church tries to make Caboose leave, but he fights back.
#3 - Caboose get's forced out.
#4 - Caboose goes out, but Pinkie Pie tags along - (Warning, this ending may contain feels meaning something sad WILL happen)
#5 - Celestia intervenes in a good way.
#6 - Celestia intervenes in a sad way.
First one to get three votes will be the ending I play off of
292409 #7 all the endings.
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Deal.
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He just finally had enough time to think
Honestly I'd really like for Church and Sarge to stick before they all left or what have you.
For endings (which I hope is NOT going to approaching just yet) I'd pick #2
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and not a good one 
)
They'll be staying for 1 or 2 chapters to see what Caboose has been doing, but then I will choose
(I am hoping for number 2 as well, because I have a plan for Carolina
Celestia ending #1 - Intervenes in a good way.
292680 Celestia ending #1
If this gets a sad ending I will eat your legs
How about the pinkie pie pie and caboose leave, it would somehow tie into cannon for season 10...
Happy Ending 2! No, wait, Celestia intervenes in a happy way! No, wait, Happy Ending 2 is better! Or is it? I guess... Not really. What about Celestia intervenes in a happy way? I guess that could work, but what about Happy Ending 2? That would work even better! Or would it?
...All right, I kid. I vote A secret ending! In which Caboose is granted free access through the two worlds. Now that'd be fun to see. Right? Right?
...Right?
...No? Fine. Happy Ending 2 then.
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That is what I was thinking when I thought of that outcome
292680 Ah mate you're killing me here. I want so many more adventures with these three fools roaming Equestria.
I mean think about it, time potentially moves so much faster in Equestria than 'reality'
Just a thought friend, just a thought
Also for some reason I had the thought of Sarge and Church getting into a territory grab match in Ponyville.
1 or 5 for me
Now I have my favorite Red with my favorite Blue (Caboose). This is gonna be great. I'll bet Church will hate this place a lot
Oooookkaaaayy... This.... is... the...
BEST FIC EVER! Man I know I loved Caboose but you capture him so perfectly in this! It just makes me wana go
and then 
and then be like 
Yeah... I love this story!
XD Oh GOSH! xD This is going to be BUCKING EPIC! xD I'm roflmao SO hard right now! xD
its raining sharges and sharges have shotguns soooooo........
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I made the mistake of favoriting this on the first chapter.
I now have 95 unread chapters.
I KNEW I FORSEEN BAD THINGS DAMMIT
It's rainin' men!! Hallelujah, it's rainin' men!!
caboose stays, Pinky Caboose stick together, Elements of Harmony turn church to stone - hes rather discord like, Sarge Bails - mussy stuff bugs him. Other Ponies get to take turns in the Other world using church's body - Lyria would love it,
awesome sarge stll have his shotgun
Somebody needs to put the Big Mac pic with 'A Shitstorm is Coming.' Now.
Now we have sarge? YES!! love when he enters everything with his shotgun.
292345 And 139 chapters later...
Alright, i'm gonna be honest here. When I heard Caboose say you won't like it when I'm angry, I thought spiky kittens were gonna start falling.
"Oh that's okay Twi, just go get the others and let me and Caboose will handle it from here." ummm. grammer fail. I think you ment Let me and Caboose handle it from here for that my friend. but I can't wait to see where this is going to go.
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I know this is a 20 week old comment but they live in a box canyon deep in space. He has ALL the time think.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Pinkie_Pie.png
Sarge got his wish. The Blues are now Spine-less. Or close to it.
Chapter five out of a hundred sixty-six! I'm on a roll!
I jsut hope Sarge dosn't go Plan B on them.
292841 Caboose in both worlds? I like it! Caboose gets the mane 6 as his AI! That would be a twist and a half! And on that bombshell I have to pick you up for a grammar error. I love the story but an error is still an error:
"Oh that's okay Twi, just go get the others and let me and Caboose will handle it from here."
Edit it to how you want it! All in all a fantastic story! This has made RvB and Eqeustria 40% cooler
The win is over 10800 (Do the math)
church caboose sarge... things are going to get interesting
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Your soooo bucking awesome for make this
My first time saying buck instead of fuck.....
All this "will It continue" debate and I'm just like I think it did or there's 200 chapters of nothing
Also celestia ending happy is my choice
Why do I get the feeling that Sarge is the horse-punching kind of guy
OMG THE FUN HAS BEEN TRIPLED!
Yay sarge is there
(Plz show lopez)
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Caboose... God damnit.
Im afraid to favorit this becuase then my unread chapters will got from 374 to like 650. But i will anyways beacuse... HEY LOOK A PINKIE PIE!
*Runs off after the Wild Pinkie Pie*
1998508 mines in the thousands right now XD
"There's a pony inside of her?" Caboose gawked. "Does it hurt?"
Let's not teach him that...the universe isn't ready.
The fun has just been doubled!
2410764 no, only when tucker hits the ground, oh wait, when that happens nopony that is female is safe! RUN FOR THE HILLS!!!!!